记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答时应避免使用口语化的表达如“What a pity”，并且注意时态一致性，如“forgot”应为“forget”。建议回答时直接表达观点，并用一两个具体例子支持，避免重复。

示例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, I often have to review my notes several times because I tend to forget information quickly.

建议: 回答中时态错误较多，如“forgot”应为“forget”。内容较为笼统，建议具体说明忘记了哪些重要事情，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

示例: Yes, I often forget important things such as the items I need to buy, the schedule of my classes, and my family members' birthdays because there are so many similar dates to remember.

建议: 回答内容不够清晰，句子结构混乱，表达不够自然。建议理清思路，使用连接词，并避免使用不恰当的比喻。

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember my family's birthdays, the schedule of my classes, and appointments I have made with others. These are important to me.

建议: 回答较为简单，表达有些重复。建议使用更丰富的词汇和句型，说明具体方法并用连接词使表达更流畅。

示例: To remember important things, I often write them on sticky notes and place them on my desk or door. This visual reminder helps me recall tasks more easily.

× A few days later I forgot everything.

✓ A few days later I forgot everything.

此句中“forgot”是过去式，符合时间状语“a few days later”，无错误。

× Yes, I usually forgot the important things, like the things I need to buy, the time of classes, the birthday of family.

✓ Yes, I usually forget the important things, like the things I need to buy, the time of classes, the birthday of family.

“usually”表示习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时“forget”，而非过去式“forgot”。

× the birthday of family

✓ the birthdays of family

“family”指一家人，通常有多个生日，应使用复数“birthdays”。

× I need to remember family's birthday, the time of classes since I think I need to buy, and the times I've made plan with others.

✓ I need to remember family birthdays, the time of classes, and the times I've made plans with others.

“family's birthday”应为复数“family birthdays”；“made plan”应为复数“made plans”；“since I think I need to buy”语义不清，建议删除。

× I put them on the sticky note and put them on the wall door on my desk.

✓ I put them on sticky notes and put them on the wall, the door, and my desk.

“sticky note”应为复数“sticky notes”；“wall door”应分开为“wall”和“door”；“on my desk”正确。