记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“memorable things”应为“memorising things”，“trying to tackling”应为“trying to tackle”。建议加强语法基础，使用更准确的词汇表达，同时避免重复和冗余。

示例: I'm not very good at memorising things because I often forget important concepts during exams. For example, I sometimes struggle to recall key math formulas when solving problems.

建议: 回答语法混乱，表达不清晰，句子结构不完整。建议练习句子结构，使用正确的时态和连词，使表达更连贯自然。

示例: Yes, last year I almost forgot an important final exam. It scared me a lot, but luckily my friend reminded me in time.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和表达不自然，如“currency”应为“currently”，“talking about the schedule”表达不准确。建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，避免口语化的填充词。

示例: Currently, I have many things to remember, but the most important is my schedule. I need to manage both my school and work life, so keeping track of deadlines is essential.

建议: 回答表达基本清晰，但有语法错误，如“utilize well on my schedule book”应为“make good use of my schedule book”。建议注意介词搭配和句子流畅性。

示例: I usually make good use of my schedule book. For example, if I have an important appointment or deadline, I write it down to remind myself so I don't miss it.

× I am not really good at memorable things because I always get lost on my examination.

✓ I am not really good at memorizing things because I always get lost in my examination.

这里'memorable'是形容词，意思是“值得记忆的”，但句子中需要的是动名词'memorizing'，表示“记忆”的动作。'get lost on my examination'中的介词'on'用错，应改为'in'，表示在考试中迷失。

× I always forget important concepts of mathematics when I am trying to tackling the question.

✓ I always forget important concepts of mathematics when I am trying to tackle the question.

动词'try'后面接动词时应使用动词原形或动名词，但这里结构是'be trying to do'，后面应接动词原形'tackle'，而不是现在分词'tackling'。

× So I'm not a person who really good at memorizing things.

✓ So I'm not a person who is really good at memorizing things.

缺少系动词'is'，导致句子结构不完整。'who'引导的定语从句中需要完整的谓语动词。

× Surely it's it so it happened in last year I almost forgot and important examination of my final year.

✓ Surely it happened last year that I almost forgot an important examination of my final year.

句子结构混乱，'it's it so'无意义，应删除。'in last year'应改为'last year'。'and important examination'中的'and'应为冠词'an'。整体调整使句子通顺。

× So it is really scared me a lot that luckily I remarked by my friend and then it's OK.

✓ So it really scared me a lot, but luckily I was reminded by my friend and then it was OK.

'it is really scared me'中'scared'用错，应为动词'scared'的过去式，主语是'it'，谓语应为'scared'。'remarked'用错，应为'reminded'。缺少被动语态助动词'was'。

× And currency, I have lots of things to remember.

✓ Currently, I have lots of things to remember.

'currency'是货币的意思，语境应为'currently'，表示“目前”。这是拼写错误。

× Like I think the most important is talking about the schedule because I have to manage my school life and work life.

✓ I think the most important thing is the schedule because I have to manage my school life and work life.

'Like'用法不当，句首不应使用。'the most important is talking about the schedule'结构不正确，应改为'the most important thing is the schedule'。

× So it's basically I have to know everything is on track.

✓ So basically, I have to know everything is on track.

'it's basically'用法错误，应去掉'it is'，直接用副词'basicallly'修饰句子。

× Like it is very important to know the deadline, something like that.

✓ It is very important to know the deadline, something like that.

句首'Like'用法不当，应去掉。

× Usually I would utilize well on my schedule book.

✓ Usually I would make good use of my schedule book.

'utilize well on'搭配错误，正确表达是'make good use of'。

× For example, if I have an important appointment or the deadline of some task, I would definitely write down and remind myself doing things before the deadline and remind myself of the appointment so I won't miss it.

✓ For example, if I have an important appointment or the deadline of some task, I would definitely write it down and remind myself to do things before the deadline and remind myself of the appointment so I won't miss it.

'write down'后应有宾语，缺少'it'。'remind myself doing things'用法错误，应为'remind myself to do things'，动词不定式用法。