记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural and concise by avoiding redundancy and correcting sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things because I value remembering important information. People often say I have a good memory, like an elephant's, which helps me a lot in daily life.

建议: Your answer is repetitive and lacks clarity. Try to avoid repeating the same idea and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and provide specific reasons.

示例: No, I have never forgotten anything important because I make a conscious effort to remember such things. For example, I often write notes or set reminders to ensure I don't forget important tasks.

建议: Your answer is too general and somewhat repetitive. Try to be more specific about what you need to remember daily and use linking words to organize your ideas clearly.

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember to complete my studies, prepare lessons for my students, and manage my schedule effectively. These tasks are important to keep my day organized.

建议: Your answer is incomplete and has grammatical mistakes. Try to complete your sentences and explain your method clearly using linking words. Also, correct verb forms for better clarity.

示例: I use an interesting technique to remember important things. For example, if there is a special occasion, I set an alarm a day before. When the alarm rings, it reminds me to prepare for the event.

× Yes, I am very well at memorizing things, which is important to remember for me, which is very much precious to me.

✓ Yes, I am very good at memorizing things, which are important for me to remember and very precious to me.

The phrase 'very well' is incorrectly used as an adjective here; 'well' is an adverb. The correct adjective to describe ability is 'good'. Also, 'which is important to remember for me' is awkward; it should be 'which are important for me to remember' to correctly refer to 'things' (plural) and use proper prepositions.

× Yes, I am very well at memorizing things, which is important to remember for me, which is very much precious to me.

✓ Yes, I am very good at memorizing things, which are important for me to remember and very precious to me.

The relative pronoun 'which' refers to 'things' (plural), so the verb should be plural 'are' instead of singular 'is'. This is a singular and plural agreement issue.

× I like to remember them all by my heart.

✓ I like to remember them all by heart.

The phrase 'by my heart' is incorrect; the correct idiomatic expression is 'by heart' without a possessive pronoun.

× And people sometimes says that I have an elephant, Elephant years.

✓ And people sometimes say that I have an elephant's memory, like elephant years.

The verb 'says' should be 'say' to agree with the plural subject 'people'. Also, the phrase 'elephant, Elephant years' is unclear; it is corrected to 'elephant's memory, like elephant years' to convey the intended meaning.

× No, as far I remember, I have never forgotten something important because as I said before, I am really good at quite good at memorizing things.

✓ No, as far as I remember, I have never forgotten anything important because, as I said before, I am quite good at memorizing things.

The phrase 'as far I remember' is missing 'as' after 'far'. Also, 'really good at quite good at' is redundant; 'quite good at' suffices. 'Something important' is better as 'anything important' in negative sentences.

× So I try not to forget the things, which is very much important for me, which is very significant for me.

✓ So I try not to forget the things, which are very important and significant to me.

'Which is' should be 'which are' to agree with plural 'things'. Also, 'very much important' is incorrect; 'very important' is correct. 'For me' is better expressed as 'to me' in this context.

× OK. Nothing special, just a normal kind of things like I have to do my studies, I have to complete my studies, I have to tutor my students and something other than that, I think it's pretty much normal.

✓ OK. Nothing special, just normal kinds of things like I have to do my studies, complete my studies, tutor my students, and other things like that. I think it's pretty normal.

'A normal kind of things' mixes singular 'a kind' with plural 'things'; it should be 'normal kinds of things' or 'a normal kind of thing'. Also, 'something other than that' is better as 'other things like that' for clarity.

× If there is any special occasion or something like that, then I try to set my alarm in an A day before, so the alarm rings and I actually remembers the things.

✓ If there is any special occasion or something like that, then I try to set my alarm a day before, so the alarm rings and I actually remember the things.

The preposition 'in' before 'an A day before' is incorrect and 'an A' is redundant; it should be 'a day before'. Also, 'remembers' should be 'remember' to agree with the subject 'I'.