记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to give a clear and concise answer directly addressing the question. Avoid filler words like 'umm' and 'uh', and reduce redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide specific examples to support your points.

示例: I'm not very good at memorizing things because I have a vague memory. However, sometimes I manage to remember something that others don't, which makes me feel special for a moment.

建议: Provide a complete and coherent answer by finishing your sentences and using linking words to explain reasons clearly. Avoid repetition and be specific about the situation to make your answer more effective.

示例: Yes, I forgot my best friend's birthday last month because I was very busy and stressed with work. This made me overlook the important date, which I regretted afterwards.

建议: Complete your answers fully and avoid trailing off. Use linking words to organize your ideas and provide specific examples of what you need to remember both at work and at home.

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember important dates such as meetings and deadlines at work, so I use sticky notes. At home, I also keep track of household chores and appointments to stay organized.

建议: Try to avoid filler words and complete your sentences. Use linking words to compare methods and explain reasons clearly. Provide a concise and coherent answer with specific examples.

示例: I usually write important notes on sticky notes at the office. However, when I go shopping, I prefer to use my phone to make notes because it's more convenient and I don't need to carry paper and pen.

× Actually, I'm, I'm not good at memorizing things.

✓ Actually, I'm not good at memorizing things.

The repetition of 'I'm' is unnecessary and disrupts the sentence flow. Removing the extra 'I'm' corrects the sentence structure and maintains the present tense usage.

× I have a vague memory.

✓ I have a vague memory.

This sentence is grammatically correct; 'memory' is singular and correctly used with 'a'. No correction needed.

× sometimes I feel very special when I memorize the thing, which, uh, mostly other people do not.

✓ sometimes I feel very special when I memorize things, which, uh, mostly other people do not.

The word 'thing' should be plural 'things' because it refers to multiple items or information to memorize. Using plural matches the general context and is grammatically correct.

× I feel very special at that moment, but uh, over.

✓ I feel very special at that moment, but then it is over.

The original sentence ends abruptly with 'over' which is incomplete. Adding 'then it is' completes the thought and corrects the sentence structure.

× Yes, there are so many things I forgot in my past, but one important thing I forgot last last month was my best friend's birthday I was very depressed about my hectic schedule and very very busy at my office so I suddenly forgot for.

✓ Yes, there are so many things I forgot in my past, but one important thing I forgot last month was my best friend's birthday. I was very depressed about my hectic schedule and very, very busy at my office, so I suddenly forgot it.

The sentence is a run-on and missing punctuation. 'last last month' should be 'last month'. Also, 'forgot for' is incorrect; it should be 'forgot it'. Adding punctuation and correcting these errors improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I was very depressed about my hectic schedule and very very busy at my office so I suddenly forgot for.

✓ I was very depressed about my hectic schedule and very, very busy at my office, so I suddenly forgot it.

The phrase 'forgot for' is incorrect; the verb 'forget' does not require the preposition 'for' in this context. The correct form is 'forgot it' to refer to the birthday.

× In my day-to-day life there are so many things I have to get to remember umm.

✓ In my day-to-day life, there are so many things I have to remember, umm.

The phrase 'have to get to remember' is awkward and incorrect. The correct expression is 'have to remember'. Also, adding a comma after 'life' improves readability.

× In my office I usually use the sticky notes to memorize the umm important dates like meetings and umm the dates for the final submission of my work.

✓ In my office, I usually use sticky notes to remember important dates like meetings and the dates for the final submission of my work.

'Use the sticky notes' should be 'use sticky notes' as 'sticky notes' is a general noun here. Also, 'memorize' is better replaced with 'remember' when referring to using notes as a memory aid. Adding a comma after 'office' improves sentence flow.

× At my home I have always.

✓ At my home, I always have reminders to help me remember things.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb or object. Completing the sentence provides clarity and correct sentence structure.

× At the office, I usually prefer to use the sticky notes by writing it down by myself.

✓ At the office, I usually prefer to use sticky notes by writing things down myself.

'The sticky notes' should be 'sticky notes' as a general reference. 'Writing it down' is vague; 'writing things down' is clearer. 'By myself' is better as 'myself' for natural phrasing.

× On the other hand, if I'm going for shopping, uh, I prefer to make notes on my phone.

✓ On the other hand, if I'm going shopping, uh, I prefer to make notes on my phone.

The phrase 'going for shopping' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'going shopping'. Removing 'for' corrects the prepositional error.

× because there is no need to pick the paper and pen with me.

✓ because there is no need to carry paper and pen with me.

The verb 'pick' is incorrect in this context; 'carry' or 'bring' is appropriate when referring to taking items along. Also, 'the paper and pen' should be 'paper and pen' as general items.

× And uh, the phone is.

✓ And, uh, the phone is convenient for that.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a predicate. Adding 'convenient for that' completes the thought and corrects the sentence structure.