记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to make your answer more clear and avoid repetition. Use complete sentences and correct grammar. Also, give more specific examples and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

示例: I am not very good at memorising things because I have a poor memory. However, I can remember important details that interest me, such as my favorite colors or the names of authors I like. For example, I always remember the name of my favorite writer because I enjoy reading their books.

建议: Improve your fluency by avoiding filler words like 'uh' and use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary and correct grammar.

示例: Yes, I have forgotten important things, especially when I am in a hurry. Because I don't have time to check my belongings carefully, I often forget items like my water bottle, book, or iPad.

建议: Try to use correct sentence structures and avoid unnecessary details. Use linking words to connect your ideas and be more specific about why these things are important to remember.

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember the time I have to leave for school, my class schedule, and my lunch order. For example, I usually order lunch during the break, so I have to remember what I ordered to tell the owner later.

建议: Avoid filler words and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent and explain clearly how you use your phone to remember things.

示例: I usually remember important things by taking notes on my iPhone. It is a very useful tool because I can easily open the app and type what I need to remember. Additionally, I use the to-do list feature to keep track of my tasks.

× I can remember the things that I wanted to ex.

✓ I can remember the things that I wanted to remember.

The phrase 'wanted to ex' is incomplete and unclear. It seems the student intended to say 'wanted to remember'. Using the correct past participle verb 'remember' completes the sentence meaningfully.

× my might be author's favorite color, author's name, or the person I like.

✓ my favorite color, author's name, or the person I like.

The phrase 'my might be author's favorite color' is grammatically incorrect and confusing. It should be 'my favorite color' to correctly express possession and singular noun usage.

× especially in rush hours since I am in rush and I have no time to recheck all the things that I should uh take with me

✓ especially during rush hours since I am in a rush and I have no time to recheck all the things that I should take with me

The phrase 'in rush' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'in a rush'. Also, 'in rush hours' should be 'during rush hours' to properly indicate the time period.

× Things I normally forget would be water bottle, book or iPad.

✓ Things I normally forget would be a water bottle, a book, or an iPad.

When listing countable singular nouns, articles 'a' or 'an' are needed before each item to indicate singularity.

× what did I order for lunch.

✓ what I ordered for lunch.

In indirect questions or statements, the word order should be subject + verb, not auxiliary verb + subject. So 'what did I order' should be 'what I ordered'.

× I normally order my lunch at break and then go back at lunch.

✓ I normally order my lunch during break and then go back at lunch.

The preposition 'at' is incorrect when referring to a period like 'break'; 'during' is the correct preposition to indicate a time period.

× I think it's a very good tool to keeping track with what I've done.

✓ I think it's a very good tool for keeping track of what I've done.

The correct prepositions are 'for keeping track of' rather than 'to keeping track with'.