记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答时时态不统一，且表达不够自然。建议使用一致的时态，并简洁表达经历和进步。

示例: Actually, I wasn't good at memorising things when I was in junior high school because I couldn't remember academic details. However, I practiced many techniques and have made some progress since then.

建议: 句子结构不够清晰，语法错误较多。建议简化句子，注意冠词和表达歉意的正确用法。

示例: Yes, it happened last month. I missed an important meeting for our presentation because I was too focused on my assignment. I felt very sorry to my group members.

建议: 表达较好，但细节连接稍显生硬。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并注意单复数形式。

示例: Recently, I've been learning how to cook, so I need to remember the ingredients and the specific steps. Besides that, I also remember my family and friends' birthdays, which helps me organize my life more efficiently.

建议: 用词不准确（timbre应为timer），句子结构简单。建议使用准确词汇并丰富句型。

示例: I usually set a timer on my phone to remind me of important tasks. Also, I sometimes tell my friends about these things, and they help remind me as well.

× Actually not.

✓ Actually, no.

这里的回答需要一个完整的句子，'Actually not.' 语法不完整，应该用 'Actually, no.' 来表达否定回答。

× I found it difficult for me when I am in junior high school, I can't remember the details of academic knowledge.

✓ I found it difficult when I was in junior high school; I couldn't remember the details of academic knowledge.

描述过去的情况时，时间状语用过去时态，'am' 应改为 'was'，'can't' 应改为过去式 'couldn't'。

× I practice a lot by many techniques and I have made some progress.

✓ I practiced a lot using many techniques and have made some progress.

'practice' 应用过去式 'practiced'，'by many techniques' 应改为 'using many techniques' 更自然。

× I missed important meeting that was held for our presentation because I was so concentrated on my own assignment so I forgot it, which made me feel so apologize to my group members.

✓ I missed an important meeting that was held for our presentation because I was so concentrated on my own assignment that I forgot it, which made me feel very apologetic to my group members.

'important meeting' 前缺少不定冠词 'an'，'so apologize' 用法错误，应改为形容词 'apologetic'，并且句子连接词用 'that' 更合适。

× I was so concentrated on my own assignment so I forgot it, which made me feel so apologize to my group members.

✓ I was so concentrated on my own assignment that I forgot it, which made me feel very apologetic towards my group members.

'concentrated on' 正确，'feel so apologize' 错误，应为 'feel apologetic'，'to my group members' 应改为 'towards my group members'。

× I also need to remember family and friends birthday which helped me arrange my life more efficiently.

✓ I also need to remember family and friends' birthdays, which help me arrange my life more efficiently.

'friends birthday' 应为复数所有格 'friends' birthdays'，动词 'helped' 应与现在时态保持一致改为 'help'。

× I set a timbre on the reminder on my phone which can remind me what things I need to do.

✓ I set a timer on the reminder on my phone which can remind me of the things I need to do.

'timbre' 是音色，应为 'timer'，'remind me what things' 应改为 'remind me of the things'。