记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Ваш ответ естественный, но немного длинный и содержит повторения. Попробуйте сделать ответ более кратким и структурированным, например, начните с прямого ответа, затем приведите пример. Используйте связующие слова для логичности.

示例: Honestly, I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, my friend often tells me stories, but I rarely remember any of them.

建议: Ответ содержит повторения и не очень чётко сформулирован. Рекомендуется использовать более простые и ясные предложения, избегать тавтологии и добавить связующие слова для плавности.

示例: I try not to forget important things because I believe it's essential. For instance, I always make sure to remember important dates and appointments.

建议: Ответ неясен и содержит ошибки. Рекомендуется структурировать ответ, использовать правильные выражения и избегать лишних слов. Добавьте связующие слова для логичности.

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember my morning and evening routines. For example, in the morning, I do some warm-up exercises and follow my skincare routine, and in the evening, I repeat my skincare routine.

建议: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и немного неорганизован. Рекомендуется использовать более простые и правильные конструкции, а также связующие слова для плавности.

示例: I use an app called Tick Tick to remember important things. I write notes and set notifications to remind me at the right time.

× I realized that when my friend said that he was telling me many stories and I don't remember even one of the stories he said to me.

✓ I realized that when my friend said that he was telling me many stories and I didn't remember even one of the stories he told me.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. Since the context is in the past, 'don't remember' should be 'didn't remember' and 'he said' should be 'he told' to maintain past tense consistency.

× Actually, if it is something important, really important to me, then I try to not forget about something important because it is my principle.

✓ Actually, if it is something important, really important to me, then I try not to forget about it because it is my principle.

The phrase 'try to not forget' is awkward; the correct modal verb usage is 'try not to forget'. Also, 'about something important' is vague; 'about it' refers back to the important thing.

× I keep the principle that I need to remember everything that is important to me.

✓ I keep the principle that I need to remember everything important to me.

The phrase 'everything that is important to me' is correct but can be simplified to 'everything important to me' for better fluency and naturalness.

× Uh, personally, I think that I need, I have to remember only too fast of my daily life.

✓ Uh, personally, I think that I need to remember only the fast parts of my daily life.

The phrase 'only too fast of my daily life' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'only the fast parts of my daily life' to convey the intended meaning.

× In the morning I need to do some warm up and to my skin care routine and in the evening just scratching and doing my evening skin care routine.

✓ In the morning I need to do some warm-up and my skin care routine, and in the evening just scratching and doing my evening skin care routine.

The phrase 'to my skin care routine' is incorrect; it should be 'my skin care routine' without 'to'. Also, 'warm up' as a noun should be hyphenated as 'warm-up'.

× Recently I downloaded the app named Tick Tick and this app related to note taking about your important things and I can just write it down to my phone and put a notification in what time it should notify me about the important things.

✓ Recently I downloaded the app named Tick Tick, and this app is related to note-taking about important things. I can just write them down on my phone and set a notification for when it should remind me about the important things.

The sentence has several preposition errors: 'related to note taking about your important things' should be 'related to note-taking about important things'; 'write it down to my phone' should be 'write them down on my phone'; 'put a notification in what time' should be 'set a notification for when'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical correctness.