记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly answering the question and providing a clear reason. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure.

示例: To be honest, I'm not very good at memorising. For example, I struggled a lot with history exams because I had to remember many dates and facts.

建议: Your answer is confusing and has repetition and grammatical mistakes. Try to clearly state what you forgot and why it was important, using linking words to improve coherence.

示例: Yes, I have. Once, I forgot to bring my notes containing important information about companies when I was job hunting, which made it difficult to prepare for interviews.

建议: Your answer is relevant but contains repetition and could be more fluent. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific about why checking the stove is important.

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember to check the stove before leaving the house because if I forget, it could cause a dangerous fire.

建议: Your answer is understandable but has repetition and minor grammatical errors. Try to use linking words and more precise vocabulary to explain your methods clearly.

示例: I usually take photos or write important information down on paper because these methods help me remember things more easily.

× I used to feel a lot of history class exam which I needed to memorize a lot.

✓ I used to have a lot of history class exams which I needed to memorize a lot.

The verb 'feel' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'have' to indicate possession of exams in the past tense. 'Used to have' correctly expresses past habitual action.

× That's why I'm thinking I'm not good at memorizing.

✓ That's why I think I'm not good at memorizing.

The phrase 'I'm thinking' is incorrect in this context; 'think' is a stative verb and is usually used in the simple present tense to express opinions or beliefs.

× Yes I have. I I forgot to bring my secret note to bring when I'm doing job hunt to which all the company history were were written.

✓ Yes, I have. I forgot to bring my secret note when I was job hunting, in which all the company history was written.

The sentence has multiple tense errors: 'I'm doing job hunt' should be past continuous or past simple 'I was job hunting'; 'were were' is a repetition and incorrect plural verb for 'history' which is uncountable and takes singular verb 'was'. Also, 'to bring' is redundant.

× I forgot to bring my secret note to bring when I'm doing job hunt to which all the company history were were written.

✓ I forgot to bring my secret note when I was job hunting, in which all the company history was written.

The preposition 'to' before 'which' is unnecessary and incorrect here. The phrase should be 'in which' to indicate the content of the note.

× all the company history were were written.

✓ all the company history was written.

'History' is an uncountable noun and should be treated as singular, so the verb should be 'was' not 'were'.

× In my daily life I think most important thing is when I'm going out checking the the stoves.

✓ In my daily life, I think the most important thing is checking the stove when I'm going out.

'Stoves' should be singular 'stove' if referring to a single stove; also, 'most important thing' requires the definite article 'the'.

× In my daily life I think most important thing is when I'm going out checking the the stoves.

✓ In my daily life, I think the most important thing is to check the stove when I'm going out.

The sentence structure is awkward; 'is when I'm going out checking the stoves' should be rephrased to 'is to check the stove when I'm going out' for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× If I forget to check the terrible things will happen like a fire.

✓ If I forget to check it, terrible things will happen, like a fire.

The sentence lacks a clear object after 'check'; adding 'it' clarifies the meaning. Also, a comma is needed before 'like a fire' to separate the clauses.

× I use the photos or I try to write write them down on the paper so that make me easier to remember the things.

✓ I use photos or try to write them down on paper so that it makes it easier for me to remember things.

'The photos' should be 'photos' unless specific photos are meant; 'write write' is a repetition error; 'make me easier' is incorrect, it should be 'makes it easier for me'; 'the things' should be 'things' unless specific things are referred to.