记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中存在语法错误，如'memory things'应为'memorising things'，'I'm struggle'应为'I struggle'。建议注意动词形式和词汇搭配，避免重复表达。回答可以更简洁自然，避免冗余。

示例: I'm okay at memorising things, but I find it difficult to remember details and dates. However, if I focus and practice, I can memorise important information.

建议: 回答中有语法错误，如'forgotten important things'应为'forgetting important things'。建议使用更准确的时态和表达，句子结构可以更清晰。

示例: Yes, I once forgot an important school project, which caused me a lot of trouble. Since then, I have learned to be more organized to avoid forgetting important tasks.

建议: 回答内容较完整，但句子较长且缺少连接词，建议使用连接词使表达更流畅自然。

示例: I need to remember important things such as appointments, deadlines, and daily tasks. Besides, I also try to keep phone numbers, passwords, and shopping lists in mind.

建议: 回答中有重复词汇，如'I sometimes I repeat'，应注意语法和表达的准确性。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯。

示例: I usually write important things down on my phone or in a notebook. Additionally, reminders and alerts help me remember better. Sometimes, I repeat the information to myself to make it stick in my memory.

× I'm just OK at memory things, but I'm particularly not good at it.

✓ I'm just OK at memorizing things, but I'm particularly not good at it.

这里'memory things'用法不正确，应该用动名词'memorizing things'表示记忆的动作。

× but I'm struggle with memory details and dates.

✓ but I struggle with memory details and dates.

动词'struggle'前不需要助动词'am'，应直接用动词原形，表示现在时态。

× I forgot an important school project before which made me a lot of trouble,

✓ I forgot an important school project before, which caused me a lot of trouble,

句中'which made me a lot of trouble'表达不准确，应该用'caused me a lot of trouble'更符合英语习惯。

× so that I can avoid forgotten important things.

✓ so that I can avoid forgetting important things.

动词'forgotten'是过去分词，句中应使用动名词'forgetting'表示避免做某事。

× I usually write them down on my phone or on a notebook.

✓ I usually write them down on my phone or in a notebook.

'write down'后面应使用介词'in'表示写在笔记本里，而不是'on'。

× I sometimes I repeat the information to myself so it sticks in my memory better.

✓ Sometimes I repeat the information to myself so it sticks in my memory better.

句中重复使用了'I sometimes'，应去掉一个，使句子通顺。