记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答中有语法错误和表达不自然的问题。建议你直接回答问题，使用完整且正确的句子，并且避免重复和不连贯的表达。可以先给出一个明确的主题句，然后用具体的细节支持。

示例: I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, when I was in secondary school, I had to recite poetry, but I found it very difficult and often forgot the lines.

建议: 回答时要注意句子结构的完整和逻辑的清晰。避免重复和语法错误。可以先直接回答问题，然后用具体的例子说明。

示例: Yes, I have forgotten something important. For instance, during my final university exam, I forgot to bring my passport, which was required to enter the exam hall. It was a very serious situation.

建议: 回答时要更直接地回应问题，避免不必要的内容。句子要简洁且连贯，使用连接词使表达更自然。

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember important tasks and appointments. Also, as a student, I try to learn something new every day to broaden my horizons.

建议: 回答时要注意句子结构的完整和表达的清晰。可以先给出主题句，然后用具体细节支持，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

示例: I usually write important things on a list. For example, I save my Apple ID on my phone so that if I forget it, I can easily check it.

× Well, I really didn't get a memory things.

✓ Well, I really don't have a good memory.

The phrase 'a memory things' is incorrect because 'memory' is a singular noun and 'things' is plural, causing a singular and plural mismatch. The correct expression is 'a good memory' to indicate the ability to remember.

× You know when I remember when I was in a secondary school, my teacher need us require us to recite some poetry.

✓ You know, when I was in secondary school, my teacher required us to recite some poetry.

The sentence incorrectly mixes tenses and verb forms. 'Remember' is unnecessary here, and 'need us require us' is redundant and incorrect. The past tense 'required' should be used to match the past time frame.

× You know, it's awful and I did I really did a bad job in so I always I'm always the person who.

✓ You know, it was awful and I really did a bad job, so I was always the person who struggled.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses incorrectly. Since the event happened in the past, past tense verbs like 'was' and 'did' should be used consistently. The sentence is also incomplete and needs clarification.

× When I was taking the final exam of my, uh, university career, I forgot to take my passport, you know, and need passport to get into the getting to the sense, but I forgot to take it.

✓ When I was taking the final exam of my university career, I forgot to take my passport, which I needed to get into the exam hall, but I forgot it.

The modal verb 'need' is incorrectly used without 'to' and in the wrong form. The correct past tense 'needed' should be used to express necessity in the past.

× Well, I don't know what to remember because I'm not, I didn't have some disease.

✓ Well, I don't know what to remember because I don't have any disease.

The sentence incorrectly switches from present tense 'don't know' to past tense 'didn't have'. To maintain consistency, present tense 'don't have' should be used.

× I don't need to take some medicines.

✓ I don't need to take any medicine.

'Medicines' is plural, but in negative sentences, 'any medicine' is more appropriate and natural in English.

× But as a student, I think what we, what we should do is to learn something every day.

✓ But as a student, I think what we should do is learn something every day.

The phrase 'what we, what we should do is to learn' is redundant. Also, 'learn something every day' is correct; 'something' is singular and fits here.

× Yeah, we need to learn something and we need to broaden my horizon, you know?

✓ Yeah, we need to learn something and we need to broaden our horizons, you know?

The pronoun 'my' is incorrect because the subject is 'we'. It should be 'our horizons' to match the plural subject and common expression.

× I usually write important things on the list, yet I have a list and these things.

✓ I usually write important things on a list; I have a list for these things.

The adverb 'usually' is correctly placed, but the sentence is awkward and unclear. 'On a list' is the correct prepositional phrase, and the sentence is restructured for clarity.

× If these things are really important, such as, umm, my Apple ID, you know, I really write it down on my on my phone that I can when I was forget, I can take a look and and to get a search, right?

✓ If these things are really important, such as my Apple ID, I write them down on my phone so that when I forget, I can take a look and search for them, right?

The pronouns and verb tenses are incorrect and inconsistent. 'Write it down' should be 'write them down' to match plural 'things'. 'When I was forget' is incorrect; it should be 'when I forget'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct pronoun use.