记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is generally clear but can be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating similar ideas like 'memorizing or cramming things' and 'I usually do this thing'. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

示例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For instance, I often create mind maps, which help me recall difficult information during exams.

建议: Your answer is incomplete and ends abruptly. Try to complete your thoughts and avoid vague phrases like 'or'. Also, use linking words to explain reasons clearly and provide a complete response.

示例: Yes, I have forgotten some important answers during exams, mainly because of the pressure and stress I feel at that time.

建议: Your answer has some grammatical errors and unclear phrases like 'temperatures at what I should stole my samples'. Try to use correct grammar and be more specific. Also, avoid vague endings like 'and like that'.

示例: As a master's student doing research, I need to remember the exact temperatures at which I should store my samples. Besides that, I also keep track of grocery items I need to buy daily.

建议: Your answer is informative but can be more fluent and natural. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'also' properly and avoid repetitive phrases. Try to combine sentences for better flow.

示例: I use several methods to remember important things. For example, I make lists and jot down notes in my notebook. Also, I create mind maps by linking related ideas, which helps me memorise effectively.

× I usually make mind maps which helps me to remember things.

✓ I usually make mind maps which help me to remember things.

The subject 'mind maps' is plural, so the verb should be 'help' instead of 'helps' to agree in number.

× I have forgotten some important answers, a few questions while sitting in exam.

✓ I have forgotten some important answers and a few questions while sitting in the exam.

The sentence is missing a conjunction 'and' to connect the two objects and the article 'the' before 'exam' is needed for correctness.

× it is very much important for me to remember the temperatures at what I should stole my samples.

✓ it is very important for me to remember the temperatures at which I should store my samples.

The preposition 'at' should be followed by 'which' to form a relative clause. Also, 'stole' is incorrect past tense of 'store'; the correct verb is 'store' in present tense here.

× at what I should stole my samples.

✓ at which I should store my samples.

The verb 'stole' is past tense of 'steal' and incorrect here; the correct verb is 'store' in base form after modal 'should'.

× Also I use different method of making mind map where I link certain things with another so it helps me to memorize them.

✓ Also I use different methods of making mind maps where I link certain things with others so it helps me to memorize them.

'Method' should be plural 'methods' to match context, 'mind map' should be plural 'mind maps', and 'another' should be 'others' to refer to multiple items.