记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 답변이 자연스럽고 효과적이지만, 문장이 다소 어색하고 구체적인 설명이 부족합니다. 'divided 3 into 3 sections' 부분이 명확하지 않아 이해하기 어렵습니다. 좀 더 명확하고 구체적인 예시를 들어 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

示例: Yes, I am good at memorizing things because I use a method called chunking. For example, when I studied for the CPA exam, I divided the material into three main sections to make it easier to remember.

建议: 문법 오류와 문장 구조가 부자연스럽고, 문장이 완성되지 않아 의미 전달이 어렵습니다. 문장을 완성하고, 시제를 일관되게 사용하며, 구체적인 상황 설명을 명확하게 하는 연습이 필요합니다.

示例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For example, recently when I was going out to have dinner with my mom, I forgot to bring my cell phone. So, I had to go back home to get it.

建议: 답변이 불완전하고 문법적으로 부자연스럽습니다. 문장을 완성하고, 명확한 주제 문장과 구체적인 세부사항을 포함하여 답변을 구조화하는 연습이 필요합니다.

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember my responsibilities as a CPA. This helps me stay focused and work diligently for the public's benefit.

建议: 답변이 다소 불완전하고 문장이 매끄럽지 않습니다. 문장을 완성하고, 연결어를 사용하여 논리적으로 답변을 구성하며, 구체적인 예시를 추가하는 연습이 필요합니다.

示例: I usually use the memo app on my cell phone to remember important tasks. Also, I like to organize my files and keep a diary where I write down what I did today and what I need to do tomorrow.

× Yes, I have been forgotten important thing when I was going out for example recently I was going out with my mom to have dinner but I forgot to bring my cell phone so I went back to my place to get my cell phone but later when I.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten an important thing when I was going out. For example, recently I was going out with my mom to have dinner but I forgot to bring my cell phone, so I went back to my place to get my cell phone.

The phrase 'have been forgotten' is incorrect because 'forgotten' is the past participle and should be used with 'have' not 'have been'. The correct form is 'I have forgotten'. Also, 'important thing' should be 'an important thing' to include the article. The sentence was also fragmented and needed punctuation for clarity.

× Yes, I have been forgotten important thing when I was going out for example recently I was going out with my mom to have dinner but I forgot to bring my cell phone so I went back to my place to get my cell phone but later when I.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten an important thing when I was going out. For example, recently I was going out with my mom to have dinner but I forgot to bring my cell phone, so I went back to my place to get my cell phone.

The phrase 'important thing' requires an article 'an' because it is a singular countable noun. Without the article, the sentence is grammatically incorrect.

× I am also need to be aware that.

✓ I also need to be aware that.

The phrase 'I am also need' is incorrect because 'am' is unnecessary here. The correct form is 'I also need'. The pronoun 'I' is correct but the verb form following it was wrong.

× I usually use memo in my cell phone to remember my important things to do.

✓ I usually use the memo on my cell phone to remember important things I need to do.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to using a memo on a device. The correct preposition is 'on'. Also, 'memo' should be preceded by 'the' to specify the memo function or app.

× Also I like to organize my files and diary to write down what I did today or what I need to do in.

✓ Also, I like to organize my files and diary to write down what I did today or what I need to do.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'in' which is incorrect and unnecessary. Removing 'in' completes the sentence properly. The pronouns used are correct but the sentence structure was incomplete.