记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences simpler and more natural. Also, avoid redundancy and focus on clear expression. For example, say "I am not very good at memorizing things, but I can remember simple things for my exams."

示例: I am not very good at memorizing things because I find it difficult to remember complex information. However, I can easily memorize simple facts for my exams.

建议: Your answer is incomplete and confusing. Try to give a clear example and complete your sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas. For example, "Yes, I often forget important things. For instance, I sometimes forget what I memorized the day before an exam."

示例: Yes, I often forget important things. For example, during my main exams, I sometimes forget the information I memorized just the day before.

建议: Your answer is relevant but a bit repetitive and has grammatical mistakes. Try to use linking words like 'so' or 'therefore' to make your answer coherent. For example, "Currently, I am preparing for my IELTS exam, so I need to remember to make time for studying every day."

示例: Currently, I am preparing for my IELTS exam, so I need to remember to allocate time for studying daily. Even when I go out or spend time with friends, I keep in mind that I must study more.

建议: Your answer is understandable but could be more fluent and structured. Use linking words like 'if' and 'but' properly and avoid repetition. For example, "If something is very important, I repeat it several times to remember it. Otherwise, I may not focus on it much."

示例: If something is very important, I repeat it several times to help me remember. However, if it is less important, I might not pay much attention to it.

× I am not very expert of things memorizing because I am so bad at this kind of thing my brain cannot braining to memorizing things.

✓ I am not very expert at memorizing things because I am so bad at this kind of thing; my brain cannot manage to memorize things.

The phrase 'expert of things memorizing' is incorrect; the correct preposition after 'expert' is 'at'. Also, 'braining to memorizing' is incorrect; it should be 'manage to memorize'. Use 'memorizing' as a gerund after 'expert at' and 'manage to' before the base verb.

× my brain cannot braining to memorizing things.

✓ my brain cannot manage to memorize things.

The verb 'braining' is not correct here. The correct form is 'manage to memorize' where 'manage' is followed by the infinitive 'to memorize'.

× But the easy things I can memorize most of the days for my exams.

✓ But the easy things I can memorize most days for my exams.

The phrase 'most of the days' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'most days' when referring to frequency in general.

× most of the time I had forgotten my essential things.

✓ most of the time I have forgotten my essential things.

The past perfect 'had forgotten' is incorrect here because the sentence refers to a general past experience; present perfect 'have forgotten' is appropriate to indicate repeated past actions relevant to the present.

× If I give an example whenever I write on my main exam this most of the time I I had forgotten things which I memorized just day before of my exam.

✓ For example, during my main exam, most of the time I have forgotten things which I memorized just the day before my exam.

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. 'If I give an example whenever I write on my main exam this most of the time I I had forgotten things' is a run-on and unclear. It is better to say 'For example, during my main exam, most of the time I have forgotten things which I memorized just the day before my exam.' Also, 'day before of my exam' is incorrect; it should be 'the day before my exam'.

× just day before of my exam.

✓ just the day before my exam.

The preposition 'of' is unnecessary after 'before' in this context. The correct phrase is 'the day before my exam'.

× So this is very.

✓ So this is very frustrating.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a main verb or complement. Adding an adjective like 'frustrating' completes the thought.

× In right now I am taking preparation for my for my IELTS exam and in daily life I have to remember that I have to make time for study my IELTS exam.

✓ Right now I am preparing for my IELTS exam and in daily life I have to remember to make time to study for my IELTS exam.

'In right now' is incorrect; 'Right now' is correct. 'Taking preparation for' should be 'preparing for'. 'Make time for study' should be 'make time to study'. Also, 'study my IELTS exam' should be 'study for my IELTS exam'.

× So whenever I go outside or my university or spending time with my friends, however, I have to keep in mind that I have to study more.

✓ So whenever I go outside, to my university, or spend time with my friends, I have to keep in mind that I have to study more.

The phrase 'or my university' needs the preposition 'to' to be correct: 'go to my university'. Also, 'or spending time' should be parallel with 'go', so 'or spend time'. The word 'however' is unnecessary and disrupts the sentence flow.

× I try to repeat it constantly so that I don't forget the things.

✓ I try to repeat it constantly so that I don't forget the things.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× But if it is not more essential for me, I kind of avoid the thing, but I try.

✓ But if it is not very essential for me, I kind of avoid the thing, but I try.

The phrase 'not more essential' is incorrect; it should be 'not very essential'. Also, 'the thing' is vague; it would be better to say 'it' or 'that thing' for clarity.