记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Tapai ko uttar ma thulo matra filler shabda haru (uh) cha, jasle kura prabhavit rup ma prastut garna garo parcha. Tapai le pratyaksha ra spashta topic sentence dinu parcha ra thap bibaran haru jodne bela ma linking words jastai 'because' ya 'therefore' prayog garnu parcha. English ma natural ra prabhavit uttar dinu ko lagi, sentence haru chhoto ra spashta rakhnu parcha.

示例: Yes, I am good at memorising things because I was very good at maths as a child. I used to memorise mathematical formulas which helped me solve problems quickly. Therefore, maths has helped me develop strong memorisation skills from an early age.

建议: Tapai ko uttar ma thulo matra repetition ra thulo sentence haru chan. Tapai le pratyaksha topic sentence dinu parcha ra thap bibaran haru jodne bela ma linking words jastai 'for example' ya 'which caused' prayog garnu parcha. English ma spashta ra prabhavit uttar dinu ko lagi, sentence haru chhoto ra logical rakhnu parcha.

示例: Yes, I once forgot my airplane ticket at home, which was very stressful. For example, I had to rush back to get it, and I almost missed my flight. This experience taught me to be more careful with important documents.

建议: Tapai ko uttar ma filler shabda haru dherai chan ra sentence haru lamo ra alikati aspaṣṭa chan. Tapai le pratyaksha topic sentence dinu parcha ra thap bibaran haru jodne bela ma linking words jastai 'also' ya 'in addition' prayog garnu parcha. English ma natural ra prabhavit uttar dinu ko lagi, sentence haru chhoto, spashta ra sangathit rakhnu parcha.

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember to drink enough water and eat healthy food. Also, I have to complete my work tasks before the end of the day to submit them to my boss. These things help me stay healthy and productive.

建议: Tapai ko uttar ma kehi grammar ra word choice ma sudhar garna sakinchha. Tapai le pratyaksha topic sentence dinu parcha ra thap bibaran haru jodne bela ma linking words jastai 'for instance' ya 'so' prayog garnu parcha. English ma natural ra prabhavit uttar dinu ko lagi, sentence haru chhoto ra spashta rakhnu parcha.

示例: I usually remember important things by setting reminders on my iPhone. For instance, the app notifies me of deadlines in advance, so I never miss important dates. This method helps me stay organized and punctual.

× Uh, yes. Uh, I'm do good at, uh, memorizing things.

✓ Uh, yes. Uh, I'm good at, uh, memorizing things.

The phrase 'I'm do good' is incorrect because 'do' is not used with 'I am' in this context. The correct form is 'I'm good at' followed by the gerund 'memorizing'. The error is due to incorrect verb form usage after the verb 'to be'.

× As I was a kid, I was very good at maths and I usually used to memorize the, uh, mathematical formula that is needed in the equation.

✓ As I was a kid, I was very good at maths and I usually used to memorize the, uh, mathematical formulas that were needed in the equations.

The sentence has singular/plural inconsistency and tense issues. 'Formula' should be plural 'formulas' because usually there are multiple formulas. Also, 'that is needed' should be 'that were needed' to match past tense context. The error is due to incorrect tense and singular/plural agreement.

× So, uh, from my early childhood, maths help me a lot in memorizing things.

✓ So, uh, from my early childhood, maths has helped me a lot in memorizing things.

The verb 'help' should be in present perfect tense 'has helped' to indicate an action continuing from past to present. The error is due to incorrect tense usage.

× Yes, I have forgotten something important in my life.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten something important in my life.

This sentence is correct as it uses present perfect tense appropriately to indicate an experience up to now.

× That was my ticket, airplane ticket that I needed in the airport, which I have forgotten in my home, which was very much stressful at that time.

✓ That was my airplane ticket that I needed at the airport, which I had forgotten at home, and it was very stressful at that time.

The sentence has awkward structure and preposition errors. 'In the airport' should be 'at the airport', 'in my home' should be 'at home'. Also, 'which was very much stressful' is better as 'and it was very stressful'. The error is due to sentence structure and preposition misuse.

× The things that I need to remember in my daily life is, uh, the amount of water that I'm in taking and the good food that I'm, uh, taking inside my body and also the work that I need to accomplish by end of the day that needs to be, uh, soon to my boss at my work.

✓ The things that I need to remember in my daily life are, uh, the amount of water that I'm taking in, the good food that I'm eating, and also the work that I need to accomplish by the end of the day that needs to be submitted to my boss at my work.

The subject 'things' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. 'I'm in taking' is incorrect; correct form is 'I'm taking in'. 'Taking inside my body' is better expressed as 'eating'. 'Needs to be soon to my boss' is unclear; 'needs to be submitted to my boss' is clearer. The error is due to singular/plural agreement, verb form, and preposition misuse.

× The things that I need to remember in my daily life is, uh, the amount of water that I'm in taking and the good food that I'm, uh, taking inside my body and also the work that I need to accomplish by end of the day that needs to be, uh, soon to my boss at my work.

✓ The things that I need to remember in my daily life are, uh, the amount of water that I'm taking in, the good food that I'm eating, and also the work that I need to accomplish by the end of the day that needs to be submitted to my boss at my work.

Prepositions 'in taking' should be 'taking in', 'by end of the day' should be 'by the end of the day', and 'soon to my boss' is incorrect; 'submitted to my boss' is appropriate. The error is due to incorrect preposition usage.

× That was my ticket, airplane ticket that I needed in the airport, which I have forgotten in my home, which was very much stressful at that time.

✓ That was my airplane ticket that I needed at the airport, which I had forgotten at home, which was very stressful at that time.

Prepositions 'in the airport' and 'in my home' are incorrect; the correct prepositions are 'at the airport' and 'at home'. The error is due to incorrect preposition usage.

× I usually remember importing things nowadays by setting a reminder that is available in the iPhone app.

✓ I usually remember important things nowadays by setting a reminder that is available in the iPhone app.

The word 'importing' is a typo or incorrect word; it should be 'important'. The error is due to incorrect word choice.

× That helps me remind the date and even the time that is dictated before before the deadline of anything that is important to me.

✓ That helps me remember the date and even the time that is set before the deadline of anything that is important to me.

The phrase 'helps me remind' is incorrect; it should be 'helps me remember'. Also, 'dictated before before the deadline' is awkward; 'set before the deadline' is better. The error is due to incorrect verb usage and redundancy.