记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答不够自然且表达不清晰，存在语法错误和冗余。建议简洁明了地表达观点，并使用正确的句子结构。

示例: Yes, I think I am quite good at memorising things. For example, when I go shopping, I always make a list to help me remember what to buy.

建议: 回答内容较为具体，但语法和表达不够准确。建议注意时态和句子结构，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

示例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For instance, during my final exams, I forgot some essential formulas. At that moment, I felt very worried because they were important for my scores, but luckily I remembered them in time and finished the exam.

建议: 回答内容不够具体且表达不流畅。建议明确表达需要记住的具体内容，并使用连接词使句子更自然。

示例: As a student, I need to remember many formulas and important concepts from my courses. Also, during holidays, I have to remember where to go shopping and my work schedule.

建议: 表达不够清晰且有语法错误。建议简洁明了地说明记忆方法，并使用正确的句子结构。

示例: I usually write things down because I believe writing helps me remember better. So, before doing something important, I make a list to keep track of it.

× Without truth and no greater man Wrathy, I was thinking I know so brilliant that I can remember everything.

✓ Honestly, I was thinking I am so brilliant that I can remember everything.

原句结构混乱，表达不清晰。应使用简单明了的句子表达自己的想法。建议使用“Honestly, I was thinking I am so brilliant that I can remember everything.”来表达“老实说，我认为自己很聪明，能记住所有东西”。

× So every time when I want to go to shopping, I will take a list which the things I I want to buy on it.

✓ So every time when I want to go shopping, I will take a list with the things I want to buy on it.

“go to shopping”错误，正确表达是“go shopping”。“a list which the things I want to buy on it”结构不正确，应改为“a list with the things I want to buy on it”。

× For example, when I taking final exams, I forgot some essential formulas.

✓ For example, when I was taking final exams, I forgot some essential formulas.

“when I taking”缺少助动词，应为“when I was taking”。时态应保持一致，描述过去发生的事情用过去时。

× You know, that time I feel really worried about because it's a big part of scores, but finally I remember it and I finish.

✓ You know, at that time I felt really worried because it was a big part of the scores, but finally I remembered it and finished.

描述过去的事情，动词应使用过去时态，如“felt”，“was”，“remembered”，“finished”。

× In my holiday, I need to remember something where I go to shopping and work.

✓ During my holiday, I need to remember things when I go shopping and work.

“In my holiday”应改为“During my holiday”。“something where I go to shopping and work”表达不清，应改为“things when I go shopping and work”。

× I always write down it because you know there are those in China.

✓ I always write it down because, you know, people in China do that.

“write down it”顺序错误，应为“write it down”。“there are those in China”表达不清，应改为“people in China do that”。

× So I will write down a list before I do something is essential.

✓ So I will write a list before I do something essential.

“write down a list”不合适，通常说“write a list”。“before I do something is essential”结构错误，应改为“before I do something essential”。