记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn có vẻ lặp lại và thiếu sự mạch lạc. Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn, đồng thời sử dụng các liên từ để làm cho câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

示例: I would say I'm not very good at memorising things naturally. For example, when I try to learn new vocabulary, I usually repeat the words several times or write them down to help me remember better.

建议: Câu trả lời chưa hoàn chỉnh và thiếu sự rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, tránh nói lan man và kết thúc câu đầy đủ để người nghe hiểu ý bạn.

示例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For instance, when I get too involved in conversations with my friends, I sometimes leave my wallet or phone behind without noticing.

建议: Bạn nên tránh lặp lại từ và câu không rõ ràng. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để kết nối ý và trình bày cụ thể hơn về những việc bạn cần nhớ trong cuộc sống hàng ngày.

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember important things like deadlines, work tasks, and appointments. Also, I try to keep track of my health by drinking enough water and eating meals on time.

建议: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng tốt nhưng có lỗi lặp từ và câu hơi rối. Bạn nên nói rõ ràng, tránh lặp lại và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

示例: To remember important things, I usually jot them down on my phone or set reminders using calendar apps. Since I'm a visual learner, I also use colors and images to help reinforce my memory.

× Suddenly I have I I would have to say no.

✓ Suddenly, I have to say no.

The original sentence contains redundant words 'I I' and an unnecessary modal 'would' which is not appropriate here. The corrected sentence uses the present tense 'have to say' to express the speaker's current opinion clearly.

× I find it is so hard.

✓ I find it so hard.

The phrase 'find it is so hard' is grammatically awkward. The verb 'find' is typically followed by an object and an adjective or a noun phrase, so 'I find it so hard' is more natural and correct.

× For example, where I look at a vocabulary or word or sentence, I will have more time to to remember it by repeat it or write them down or write them down on paper.

✓ For example, when I look at a vocabulary word or sentence, I will have more time to remember it by repeating it or writing it down on paper.

The sentence has incorrect use of 'where' instead of 'when', and the verbs 'repeat' and 'write' should be in the gerund form 'repeating' and 'writing' after 'by'. Also, 'vocabulary' should be 'vocabulary word' for clarity.

× Oh, Sally, yes. To be honest, I have a bad habit of immersing in long conversation with my friends or family, and so when I hang out with them, I often leave my wallet or cell phone up there.

✓ Oh, sadly, yes. To be honest, I have a bad habit of immersing myself in long conversations with my friends or family, and so when I hang out with them, I often leave my wallet or cell phone somewhere.

The word 'Sally' seems to be a mishearing or typo for 'sadly'. 'Immersing' requires a reflexive pronoun 'myself'. 'Conversation' should be plural 'conversations' to match the context. 'Up there' is vague; 'somewhere' is more appropriate.

× So I.

✓ So I do.

The sentence 'So I.' is incomplete and lacks a verb. Adding 'do' completes the sentence and makes it grammatically correct.

× Well, I think there are various things that I need to remember in my daily life like deadline, work, personal task or some appointments.

✓ Well, I think there are various things that I need to remember in my daily life like deadlines, work, personal tasks, or some appointments.

The nouns 'deadline' and 'personal task' should be plural to match 'various things' and the list format.

× And about how about how about my health?

✓ And how about my health?

The phrase 'about how about how about' is repetitive and incorrect. The corrected sentence removes redundancy.

× I think I need to drink enough water and get the meal at right time and some small hobbies improve me a lot.

✓ I think I need to drink enough water, have meals at the right time, and some small hobbies improve me a lot.

'Get the meal at right time' is incorrect; 'have meals at the right time' is the correct expression. Also, commas are added for clarity.

× Oh well, to remember to remember some important things I often write I jot them down on the phone or set reminders by using calendar apps.

✓ Oh well, to remember some important things, I often jot them down on my phone or set reminders using calendar apps.

The phrase 'to remember to remember' is redundant. 'Write I jot' is incorrect; 'I often jot' is correct. 'On the phone' should be 'on my phone'.

× To be honest, I I find it quite a visual learner, so I often change from this stuff into colors or image which help me reinforce my memory a lot.

✓ To be honest, I find that I am quite a visual learner, so I often change these things into colors or images which help me reinforce my memory a lot.

The phrase 'I I find it quite a visual learner' is incorrect; it should be 'I find that I am quite a visual learner'. 'Change from this stuff into colors or image' is awkward; 'change these things into colors or images' is correct. 'Image' should be plural 'images' to match 'colors'.