记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and could be more concise. Try to avoid repeating the same idea and use linking words to make your response more coherent. Also, use more varied vocabulary related to memory and daily tasks.

示例: Yes, I consider myself good at memorising things, especially daily tasks. For instance, when I go shopping, I rarely make a To-Do List because I can easily recall what I need to buy.

建议: Your answer has grammatical errors and unclear phrases, which affect clarity. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, and use correct grammar. Avoid confusing words and ensure your example is clear and relevant.

示例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For example, during my final thesis submission, I forgot to include some pages that my supervisor had assigned to me. It was stressful to add those pages later, but eventually, I submitted the complete thesis.

建议: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Also, correct grammatical mistakes and use appropriate vocabulary.

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember my routine tasks to stay organised. For example, I make sure to complete my work assignments on time and manage household chores efficiently.

建议: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by using linking words and more precise vocabulary. Also, try to make your sentences more fluent and avoid redundancy.

示例: To remember important things, I usually make a To-Do List on my laptop, which I keep on my desktop. Whenever I open my laptop at work, I check the list to see the tasks I have completed and those I need to do that day.

× Yes, sometimes I forgot the things that are important.

✓ Yes, sometimes I have forgotten the things that are important.

The sentence requires the present perfect tense to indicate an action that has happened at an unspecified time before now. 'Forgot' is simple past, but 'have forgotten' is the correct past participle form used with 'have' to form present perfect.

× Like in my final thesis submission I forgot to add some new pages in that which my headset has assigned to me.

✓ Like in my final thesis submission, I forgot to add some new pages that my head supervisor had assigned to me.

The phrase 'my headset has assigned to me' is incorrect; 'headset' should be 'head supervisor' or similar. Also, 'has assigned' should be past perfect 'had assigned' to indicate the assignment happened before the submission. The sentence also needs a comma after 'submission' for clarity.

× It was a very hectic process after that to add the some papers.

✓ It was a very hectic process after that to add some papers.

The article 'the' before 'some papers' is incorrect. 'Some' already indicates an indefinite quantity, so 'the' should be removed.

× After this the cheese was submitted.

✓ After this, the thesis was submitted.

The word 'cheese' is a typographical error and should be 'thesis'. Also, a comma is needed after 'After this' for correct sentence structure.

× my daily routine task I done it very efficiently but just not forgetting it.

✓ I do my daily routine tasks very efficiently and make sure not to forget them.

'I done it' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I do' or 'I have done'. Also, 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to match the context. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× And this is the only thing I in my daily routine.

✓ And this is the only thing I focus on in my daily routine.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb. Adding 'focus on' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.