记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors which affect naturalness. Try to give a direct response first, then support it with clear reasons and examples. Avoid redundancy and ensure sentences are complete and coherent.

示例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, during secondary school, I had to remember a lot of information for exams, and I usually achieved high marks because of this ability.

建议: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use correct verb tenses and clearer expressions. Also, use linking words to connect ideas logically.

示例: I have never forgotten anything important in my daily life because I always plan ahead. At the end of each day, I write down the tasks I need to complete the next day, which helps me stay organised.

建议: Your answer is vague and contains grammatical errors. Be more specific about what you need to remember and use correct sentence structures. Use linking words to improve coherence.

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember school assignments and deadlines. Additionally, on special occasions, I have to remember appointments with friends to hang out.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical mistakes. Use simple and clear sentences to explain your methods. Include linking words to connect ideas logically.

示例: I usually keep a schedule and write down tasks I need to complete. Also, I use the calendar app on my mobile phone to remind me of important events.

× I guess so because in my secondary school so 'cause I need to study, I need to remember a lot of stuff and I always can get a high marks in those calls.

✓ I guess so because in my secondary school I needed to study, I needed to remember a lot of stuff and I could always get high marks in those classes.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses incorrectly. Since the speaker refers to past events ('in my secondary school'), the verbs should be in the past tense ('needed', 'could'). Also, 'a high marks' is incorrect; 'marks' is plural and does not need 'a'. 'Calls' should be 'classes'. To improve, maintain consistent past tense when talking about past experiences and use correct plural forms.

× So I will save. I was good at memory things and not just is.

✓ So I would say I was good at memorising things and not just now.

The phrase 'I will save' is incorrect; it should be 'I would say' to express an opinion. 'Memory things' is incorrect; the correct form is 'memorising things'. 'And not just is' is unclear and likely intended to mean 'and not just now'. The sentence needs clearer wording and correct adjective usage.

× I don't ever forgot something in my daily life, which is important thing 'cause I'm a people who always have a little ways in.

✓ I have never forgotten anything important in my daily life because I am a person who always has a few ways in.

The phrase 'I don't ever forgot' mixes present and past tense incorrectly; it should be 'I have never forgotten' to express experience up to now. 'Important thing' should be plural or 'anything important'. 'I'm a people' is incorrect; 'people' is plural, so it should be 'I am a person'. 'Have a little ways in' is unclear and likely incorrect; it should be 'have a few ways in' or better phrased for clarity.

× In edge of day I will write down what I need to do in that day.

✓ At the end of the day I write down what I need to do that day.

The phrase 'In edge of day' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'At the end of the day'. Also, 'I will write down' should be 'I write down' to indicate a habitual action. 'In that day' is better as 'that day' without 'in'.

× So I have never experienced that before.

✓ So I have never experienced that before.

This sentence is grammatically correct and requires no correction.

× In my daily life I usually would to remember some school stuff and also in some special days I would need to remember what people I have make appointment to hang out.

✓ In my daily life I usually remember some school stuff and also on special days I need to remember which people I have made appointments with to hang out.

The phrase 'would to remember' is incorrect; 'would' should not be followed by 'to' in this context. 'Would' is unnecessary here; 'usually remember' is better. 'In some special days' should be 'on special days'. 'I have make appointment' is incorrect; it should be 'I have made appointments'. Also, 'what people' should be 'which people' and 'make appointment to hang out' should be 'made appointments with to hang out'.

× I will have a schedule booked and I usually will smack down the task that I need to complete or something written things and also I would like down on my calendar in my mobile phone as well to I thought I will fix.

✓ I have a schedule booked and I usually write down the tasks that I need to complete or some written notes, and I also like to put them on my calendar in my mobile phone so I remember to do them.

'I will have a schedule booked' is better as 'I have a schedule booked' to indicate a habitual state. 'Smack down' is informal and incorrect here; 'write down' is appropriate. 'Something written things' is unclear; 'some written notes' is better. 'I would like down' is incorrect; it should be 'I like to put down'. 'To I thought I will fix' is unclear and incorrect; it should be 'so I remember to do them'. The sentence needs clearer structure and correct verb forms.