记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating phrases like 'every word, every single word' and clarify your examples more smoothly. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

示例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For instance, I can recall conversations from several months ago, which often surprises people. This ability helps me in my studies and daily life.

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to organise your ideas more clearly and use linking words to explain why forgetting is stressful. Also, avoid repetition and improve sentence structure.

示例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. Since I study English and Japanese daily, I often forget some words or historical dates, which can be quite stressful for me.

建议: Your answer covers the main points but could be more organised and natural. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repeating similar words like 'vocabularies or words or era'. Also, clarify your points with specific examples.

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember vocabulary and historical eras for my Japanese history and English studies. Additionally, I try to remember people's names and faces to maintain good relationships.

建议: Your answer is clear but could be more fluent and natural. Use linking words like 'Firstly' and 'Secondly' to organise your points. Also, correct minor errors such as 'by a ball band' to 'with a ballpoint pen'.

示例: I have two main methods to remember important things. Firstly, I tell my family about them to reinforce my memory. Secondly, I sometimes write important notes on my hand with a ballpoint pen so I can see them easily.

× I often surprise other people because I memorize every word, every single word or actions too much.

✓ I often surprise other people because I memorize every word, every single word or action too much.

The word 'actions' should be singular 'action' to match the singular form used with 'word'. Using plural here is inconsistent and incorrect in this context.

× For example, I can remember what they say two months ago or even a year ago.

✓ For example, I can remember what they said two months ago or even a year ago.

The verb 'say' should be in the past tense 'said' because the time reference is in the past ('two months ago'). This is necessary to maintain correct tense agreement.

× So I think I have a good command of memorizing.

✓ So I think I have a good command of memorization.

The noun form 'memorization' is appropriate here instead of the gerund 'memorizing' after 'command of'. This is a common collocation in English.

× Yes I have, I study every day like English and Japanese and I have a lot of things to memorize but too often I forgot forget some words or when they happen to occur and in Japanese history so it makes me so stressful.

✓ Yes, I have. I study every day, like English and Japanese, and I have a lot of things to memorize, but too often I forget some words or when they happen to occur in Japanese history, so it makes me very stressed.

The verb 'forgot' is past tense and incorrect here; it should be 'forget' to match the present tense context. Also, 'so stressful' should be 'very stressed' to correctly describe the speaker's feeling. Commas are added for clarity.

× As a examined candidate, I need to study Japanese history and English, and I need to remember many vocabularies or words or era.

✓ As an examinee, I need to study Japanese history and English, and I need to remember many vocabulary words or eras.

'Examined candidate' is incorrect; 'examinee' is the correct term. 'Vocabulary' is an uncountable noun, so 'many vocabularies' is incorrect; instead, 'many vocabulary words' or simply 'many words' is appropriate. Also, 'era' should be plural 'eras' to match 'many'.

× So I need to remember to study things in my daily life, but I will need to remember some name or face of other people.

✓ So I need to remember to study things in my daily life, but I will need to remember some names or faces of other people.

'Name' and 'face' should be plural to match 'some'. Also, 'of other people' is correct, but plural forms are necessary for consistency.

× I have two ways to remember very significant things.

✓ I have two ways to remember very important things.

'Significant' is correct but 'important' is more natural in this context when referring to things to remember. This is a stylistic suggestion rather than a strict grammar correction.

× First one is I tell the important thing to others like my mom or my family and I try not to forget it.

✓ The first one is I tell important things to others like my mom or my family and I try not to forget them.

'First one' should be 'The first one' to specify the item. 'The important thing' should be 'important things' to match plural context. Also, 'it' should be 'them' to agree with plural 'things'.

× And also I sometimes write important event or words on my hand by a ball band so I can see it.

✓ Also, I sometimes write important events or words on my hand with a ballpoint pen so I can see them.

'On my hand' is correct, but 'by a ball band' is incorrect; it should be 'with a ballpoint pen'. Also, 'important event or words' should be plural 'events or words' to be consistent. 'It' should be 'them' to refer to plural 'events or words'.