记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and some redundancy. Try to use correct verb forms and avoid repeating similar ideas. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent. For example, you could say: "I'm not very good at memorising things, especially important ones. For instance, I often forget to bring essential items like my ID card or important clothes when I go out."

示例: I'm not very good at memorising things, especially important ones. For example, I often forget to bring my ID card or some important clothes when I travel.

建议: Your answer repeats the same idea and has grammatical mistakes with verb tenses. Try to use past perfect or simple past correctly and avoid redundancy. Also, add linking words to improve coherence. For example: "Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For instance, I once forgot to bring my ID card and favourite clothes when I went travelling."

示例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For instance, I once forgot to bring my ID card and favourite clothes when I went travelling.

建议: Your answer has grammatical errors and is somewhat unclear. Use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. Also, try to be more specific and use linking words. For example: "In my daily life, I need to remember many things, especially those related to my studies. For example, I have to memorise important knowledge from my subjects because they are essential for my exams."

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember many things, especially those related to my studies. For example, I have to memorise important knowledge from my subjects because they are essential for my exams.

建议: Your answer is clear but could be more natural and grammatically correct. Use consistent verb forms and linking words. For example: "I usually write small notes or take notes on my phone to remember important things, especially those that are significant in my life."

示例: I usually write small notes or take notes on my phone to remember important things, especially those that are significant in my life.

× I think I'm not a person who do really good at memorizing things, especially memorizing important things.

✓ I think I'm not a person who does really well at memorizing things, especially memorizing important things.

The relative pronoun 'who' refers to 'person', which is singular, so the verb should be 'does' not 'do'. Also, 'really good' should be 'really well' because 'well' is the correct adverb to modify the verb 'does'.

× I think I'm not a person who do really good at memorizing things, especially memorizing important things.

✓ I think I'm not a person who does really well at memorizing things, especially memorizing important things.

The phrase 'really good' is incorrect here because 'good' is an adjective and should not modify a verb. The correct adverb form is 'well' to describe how someone does something.

× I do often forget some important things, like to bring my audit cards or bring my important clothes before.

✓ I often forget some important things, like bringing my audit cards or my important clothes before.

The adverb 'often' should be placed before the main verb 'forget'. Also, 'like to bring' should be 'like bringing' to maintain parallel structure and correct verb form after 'like'.

× I have forgot to bring my ID cards and my favorite clothes before I go travelling.

✓ I have forgotten to bring my ID cards and my favourite clothes before I went travelling.

The past participle of 'forget' is 'forgotten', not 'forgot'. Also, the past perfect tense 'have forgotten' should be followed by a past event, so 'go travelling' should be in past tense 'went travelling'.

× So I think I do forgotten something really important.

✓ So I think I have forgotten something really important.

The phrase 'do forgotten' is incorrect. The correct form is 'have forgotten' to indicate present perfect tense, which fits the context of recalling past events relevant to the present.

× Well, I saying I need to remember many things in my daily life, especially something have deep connection with my study.

✓ Well, I am saying I need to remember many things in my daily life, especially things that have a deep connection with my study.

The verb 'saying' needs the auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense 'am saying'. Also, 'something have' is incorrect; it should be 'things that have' to agree in number and include the relative pronoun.

× especially something have deep connection with my study.

✓ especially things that have a deep connection with my study.

The word 'something' is singular but is followed by the plural verb 'have'. Changing 'something' to 'things' makes the subject plural and agrees with the verb 'have'. Also, 'deep connection' needs the article 'a'.

× I do think they're really important.

✓ I do think they are really important.

The contraction 'they're' is acceptable in speech but in formal writing or clarity, it is better to use 'they are'. However, this is a minor issue and can be acceptable in spoken English.

× Well, I think I usually take a small note or just taking notes in my phone when I need to remember important things, especially they are significant to my life.

✓ Well, I think I usually take a small note or just take notes on my phone when I need to remember important things, especially when they are significant to my life.

The phrase 'or just taking notes' should be parallel with 'take a small note', so 'taking' should be changed to 'take'. Also, the preposition 'in my phone' should be 'on my phone'. Adding 'when' before 'they are significant' improves sentence clarity.