记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答中有语法错误和表达不自然的地方，比如“memory things”应为“memorizing things”，“may forgot”应为“may forget”。建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，避免重复和语法错误，同时保持回答简洁。

示例: I'm not very good at memorizing things because my mind often goes blank, especially when I try to remember math formulas. For example, after a few times, I tend to forget them, which makes it difficult for me.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误，如“always forgot”应为“always forget”，以及表达不够连贯。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并注意时态和单复数的正确使用。

示例: Yes, I often forget my house key because I am very busy with school work. Sometimes, I have to go out quickly and forget the key, which means I get locked outside and have to call for help.

建议: 回答中表达不清晰且有语法错误，如“One of the top of my head”应为“Off the top of my head”，句子结构混乱。建议简化句子，使用正确的短语和清晰的表达。

示例: Off the top of my head, I think I need to remember my daily routine. For example, I get up at 7:00 am, have breakfast, and then go outside for activities.

建议: 回答中有重复和语法错误，如“make some make some list”和“what I need to ask is the staff”表达不准确。建议避免重复，使用更准确的表达，并保持句子简洁。

示例: I usually write important things on my mobile phone because it's an efficient way to remember. For example, when I go shopping, I make a list of items to buy and questions to ask the staff.

× Well, I think I'm not good at memory things, you know, my mind always goes blank when sometimes really attract myself.

✓ Well, I think I'm not good at memorising things, you know, my mind always goes blank when something really attracts me.

The phrase 'memory things' is incorrect; it should be 'memorising things' to express the ability to remember. Also, 'sometimes really attract myself' is incorrect; it should be 'something really attracts me' because 'attract' requires an object and 'myself' is not appropriate here.

× For example when I'm you always you need to remember some mathematic formula, but after a few times I may forgot them all, so it's quite difficult for me.

✓ For example, when you always need to remember some mathematical formulas, but after a few times I may forget them all, so it's quite difficult for me.

The sentence has tense and word form errors. 'I'm you always you need' is unclear and should be 'when you always need'. 'Mathematic formula' should be plural 'mathematical formulas'. 'May forgot' is incorrect; 'may forget' is correct because 'may' is followed by the base verb form.

× Yes, of course I always forgot the key of my house.

✓ Yes, of course I always forget the key to my house.

The verb 'forgot' is past tense, but 'always' indicates a habitual action, so present tense 'forget' is appropriate. Also, 'key of my house' should be 'key to my house' for correct preposition usage.

× You know, sometimes I always very umm, very busy in my school work, so I need to go outside very quickly and always for got the key.

✓ You know, sometimes I am always very, umm, very busy with my school work, so I need to go outside very quickly and always forget the key.

The sentence lacks the verb 'am' after 'I'. 'Very busy in my school work' should be 'very busy with my school work'. 'Always for got' is incorrect; it should be 'always forget' to match the present tense habitual action.

× So I'm trapped outside. I need to call the police.

✓ So I am trapped outside. I need to call the police.

No grammatical error in tense here; 'I'm trapped' is present tense passive meaning currently trapped, which is correct. No correction needed.

× One of the top of my head, I think it's really it must be the daily routine because your life is always follow these instructions of the daily routine, right?

✓ Off the top of my head, I think it must be the daily routine because your life always follows these instructions of the daily routine, right?

The phrase 'One of the top of my head' is incorrect; the correct idiom is 'Off the top of my head'. Also, 'your life is always follow' should be 'your life always follows' for subject-verb agreement and correct word order.

× For example, in at the 7:00 you need to get up and to eat breakfast and at Somerset you need to go outside and to have a have.

✓ For example, at 7:00 you need to get up and eat breakfast, and at Somerset you need to go outside and have a break.

The phrase 'in at the 7:00' is incorrect; 'at 7:00' is correct. 'To eat breakfast' should be 'eat breakfast' to match parallel structure. 'To have a have' is incomplete; likely intended 'have a break' or similar.

× Well, I think I write it in my mobile phone.

✓ Well, I think I write it on my mobile phone.

The correct preposition for writing notes using a device is 'on' rather than 'in'.

× It is really efficient way for me to remember things.

✓ It is a really efficient way for me to remember things.

The sentence is missing the indefinite article 'a' before 'really efficient way'.

× For example, when I go to shopping, I can, I can, I will make some make some list, for example, what what I want to buy and what I need to ask is the staff in the shopping center.

✓ For example, when I go shopping, I can, I can, I will make some lists, for example, what I want to buy and what I need to ask the staff in the shopping center.

The phrase 'go to shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'go shopping'. 'Make some make some list' is repetitive and should be 'make some lists'. 'Ask is the staff' is incorrect; it should be 'ask the staff'.

× So I think it's really efficient way.

✓ So I think it's a really efficient way.

The sentence is missing the indefinite article 'a' before 'really efficient way'.