记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm không rõ ràng, làm cho ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ vựng phù hợp để diễn đạt ý tưởng một cách tự nhiên và hiệu quả.

示例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, I can easily remember phone numbers and important dates without writing them down, which helps me a lot in both my studies and daily life.

建议: Bạn đã trả lời đúng trọng tâm câu hỏi nhưng câu trả lời có thể được cải thiện bằng cách sử dụng cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn và thêm liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn. Hãy chú ý đến thì của động từ và cách diễn đạt cảm xúc một cách tự nhiên.

示例: Yes, I once forgot about an important meeting at school. As a result, I arrived late and felt very sorry. Since then, I have promised myself to be more careful in the future.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi lặp từ và thiếu sự liên kết mạch lạc. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng các liên từ để câu văn trôi chảy hơn và tránh lặp lại từ ngữ không cần thiết.

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember the times of meetings and extra classes to make sure I am not late.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ vựng phù hợp để diễn đạt cách bạn ghi nhớ những việc quan trọng một cách tự nhiên và hiệu quả.

示例: To remember important things, I usually write them down in my planner or set reminders on my phone. This helps me keep track and avoid forgetting important appointments.

× One or two values I I think I am very good at memorising Singh 2 minutes.

✓ One or two values, I think I am very good at memorising things for 2 minutes.

The word 'Singh' seems to be a typo or misheard word. The correct word is 'things' which fits the context of memorising. This correction improves clarity and meaning.

× I can Remember Remember phone number and special days without writing them down.

✓ I can remember phone numbers and special days without writing them down.

The verb 'Remember' should be in lowercase and singular/plural form of 'phone number' should be plural 'phone numbers' to match the context. Repetition of 'Remember' is an error.

× It happens a lot in study and daily life.

✓ It happens a lot in studying and daily life.

The noun 'study' should be changed to the gerund form 'studying' to correctly express the activity. 'In study' is incorrect; 'in studying' is the proper form.

× As I remember, at once forgot about a meeting at the school.

✓ As I remember, I once forgot about a meeting at school.

The sentence is missing the subject 'I' before 'once forgot'. Also, 'at the school' is better as 'at school' unless referring to a specific school. The past tense 'forgot' is correct but needs the subject.

× After that I arrived late and I feel very sorry about that and I promised myself to be more careful in the future.

✓ After that, I arrived late and felt very sorry about it, and I promised myself to be more careful in the future.

The verb 'feel' should be in past tense 'felt' to maintain past tense consistency. Also, 'about that' is better as 'about it' for clarity.

× You know, daily life. I have to remember the time of meeting and extra class along with the time to participate in in the class to make sure I'm not late.

✓ You know, in daily life, I have to remember the time of meetings and extra classes along with the time to participate in the class to make sure I'm not late.

Added 'in' before 'daily life' to correct preposition usage. 'Meeting' and 'class' should be plural to match the context. Removed duplicate 'in' before 'the class'.

× In the denies I have to remember the time of the meeting and extra classes is very dangerous if I let.

✓ In daily life, I have to remember the time of the meeting because missing extra classes is very dangerous if I let it happen.

The original sentence is unclear and contains errors. 'Denies' is likely a typo for 'daily life'. The sentence structure is corrected to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× Therefore, is it very important to keep track?

✓ Therefore, it is very important to keep track.

The sentence is a statement, not a question, so the word order should be corrected. 'Is it' should be 'it is' to form a proper declarative sentence.