记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details, using correct grammar and avoiding redundancy. Also, keep your answer within 5 sentences.

示例: I am not very good at memorising things. For example, I often forget events that happened in the past. This has been a challenge for me, especially during my school days when I struggled to remember important information.

建议: Your answer is relevant but needs better sentence structure and clearer expression. Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific about how you solved the problem.

示例: Yes, I forgot my exam date yesterday because I was confused whether it was on the 23rd or 24th. Fortunately, I use a calendar app to keep track of important dates, which helps me remember such events.

建议: Your answer is good but can be improved by using more precise vocabulary and clearer sentence structure. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

示例: In daily life, it is important to remember our routines properly because without a timetable, achieving goals becomes difficult. Therefore, I always maintain a timetable, which helps me organise my tasks efficiently.

建议: Your answer has good content but needs clearer expression and better grammar. Use linking words to explain how the tool helps you and be specific about its features.

示例: I usually use a calendar in Notion, an AI-based app, to remember important tasks. It allows me to prioritise my work by dividing tasks into different sections, and it reminds me about what to do next.

× Unfortunately I am not that good memorizing things.

✓ Unfortunately I am not that good at memorizing things.

The verb 'good' is usually followed by the preposition 'at' when referring to ability, and the verb after 'good at' should be in the '-ing' form. So, 'good memorizing' is incorrect; it should be 'good at memorizing'. This is a common collocation error.

× I almost forget everything which are which was which were happen in my past.

✓ I almost forget everything that happened in my past.

The sentence incorrectly mixes plural and singular forms and tenses. 'Which are', 'which was', and 'which were' are inconsistent and incorrect here. The correct relative pronoun is 'that' and the verb should be in past tense 'happened' to match 'in my past'. This corrects the singular/plural and tense agreement.

× I really very struggled with this problem in my present in my school I forget.

✓ I really struggle with this problem at present; in my school, I forget things.

The phrase 'really very struggled' is incorrect; 'struggled' is past tense but the context suggests present tense. 'In my present' is awkward; 'at present' is the correct phrase. Also, 'I forget' needs an object like 'things' for clarity. This corrects tense and sentence structure.

× Yes, yesterday only I forget my exam date.

✓ Yes, just yesterday I forgot my exam date.

The verb 'forget' should be in past tense 'forgot' to match 'yesterday'. Also, 'yesterday only' is awkward; 'just yesterday' is more natural. This corrects the past tense usage.

× I'm a bit confused in 23 or 24, so fortunately I put an calendar for me to remember this that only with this help.

✓ I'm a bit confused about whether it's the 23rd or 24th, so fortunately I put a calendar reminder to help me remember.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect; 'confused about' is correct. 'Put an calendar for me' is incorrect; it should be 'put a calendar reminder'. The phrase 'that only with this help' is unclear and corrected to 'to help me remember'. This fixes preposition and phrasing errors.

× I think in our daily life we have to remember our daily routine with the proper manner because without a timetable we are not able to achieve all our goals.

✓ I think in our daily life we have to remember our daily routine properly because without a timetable we are not able to achieve all our goals.

The phrase 'with the proper manner' is awkward; 'properly' is the correct adverb form. This corrects the use of quantifiers and adverbs.

× So for me I always maintain a timetable which really helps me a lot to doing my work on.

✓ So for me, I always maintain a timetable which really helps me a lot to do my work on time.

The phrase 'helps me a lot to doing' is incorrect; after 'helps me to' the base verb 'do' should be used, not the '-ing' form. Also, 'on' is incomplete; 'on time' is the correct phrase. This corrects verb form and phrase usage.

× I generally maintain a calendar in Notion which is an AI which helps me a lot in my daily work as well as in my work office work because there is different section in which we set our priority of works and he will advise us to do.

✓ I generally maintain a calendar in Notion, which is an AI that helps me a lot in my daily work as well as in my office work because there are different sections in which we set our priorities and it advises us what to do.

The sentence has multiple article errors: 'an AI which helps' is correct but 'work office work' is awkward; 'office work' suffices. 'There is different section' should be 'there are different sections' to match plural. 'Priority of works' should be 'priorities'. Also, 'he will advise us to do' is incorrect; 'it advises us what to do' is better since AI is 'it'. This corrects article usage, plural forms, and pronouns.