记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks clarity. Try to give a direct response first, then add a specific example or reason. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for better naturalness.

示例: Yes, I am good at memorising things because I have a strong memory. For example, I can easily remember important dates and details without writing them down.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Focus on giving a clear, concise response with proper sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

示例: Yes, I once forgot an important exam when I was a child because my brother's wedding made the days very hectic. After that experience, I became more careful to remember important dates.

建议: Your answer is a bit long and somewhat confusing. Try to organise your ideas clearly using linking words and avoid filler phrases like 'I think so'. Be specific about what you need to remember and how you do it.

示例: In daily life, I need to remember appointments and tasks. Therefore, I use my mobile phone's reminder app and sometimes make timetables to stay organised and manage my time effectively.

建议: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and is somewhat repetitive. Try to give a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details using linking words. Avoid repeating the same idea.

示例: I remember important things by setting reminders on my mobile phone. Additionally, I try to mentally note my tasks for the day, which helps me stay organised.

× Well, nowadays I using my technological gadgets to make things remember

✓ Well, nowadays I am using my technological gadgets to remember things

The sentence is missing the auxiliary verb 'am' before the present participle 'using'. In English, the present continuous tense requires the verb 'to be' (am/is/are) followed by the '-ing' form of the main verb. So, 'I using' is incorrect; it should be 'I am using'. Also, 'make things remember' is awkward; 'remember things' is more natural.

× I also forget my exam by which my parents are really angry on me

✓ I also forgot my exam, which made my parents really angry with me

The phrase 'angry on me' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'angry with me'. Also, 'forget my exam by which' is awkward; it should be 'forgot my exam, which made my parents angry'. Additionally, 'forget' should be in past tense 'forgot' to match the past context.

× I also forget my exam by which my parents are really angry on me and after that I never forget things easily the main main thing

✓ I also forgot my exam, which made my parents really angry with me, and after that I never forgot important things easily

The verb 'forget' should be in past tense 'forgot' to match the past context. Also, 'are really angry' should be 'were really angry' to maintain past tense consistency. The phrase 'never forget things easily the main main thing' is unclear; it is corrected to 'never forgot important things easily' for clarity and tense consistency.

× I'm very there was my brother's marriage and I'm very it's very hectic

✓ I was very busy because it was my brother's marriage and it was very hectic

The original sentence is unclear and incorrectly structured. 'I'm very there was' is incorrect; it should be 'I was very busy because it was'. Also, 'I'm very it's very hectic' is incorrect; it should be 'it was very hectic'. The preposition and verb forms are corrected to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× So with the help of technological gadgets 1 can easily use reminders in their mobile phones as well as some people also use small charts and another make a timetable for the things

✓ So with the help of technological gadgets, one can easily use reminders on their mobile phones, and some people also use small charts and make timetables for things

The pronoun '1' is a typo and should be 'one'. Also, 'another make a timetable' is incorrect; it should be 'and make timetables'. The preposition 'in their mobile phones' is better as 'on their mobile phones'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I can easily call the things even if it's small or big

✓ I can easily recall things even if they are small or big

The verb 'call' is incorrect in this context; the correct verb is 'recall' when referring to remembering. Also, 'it's small or big' should be 'they are small or big' to agree with the plural noun 'things'. The preposition and pronoun usage are corrected accordingly.

× So I think so I'm really good in remembering

✓ So I think I am really good at remembering

The phrase 'good in remembering' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'good at remembering'. Also, 'I think so I'm' is awkward; it should be 'I think I am'. These changes improve grammatical accuracy and naturalness.