记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答时语法错误较多，表达不够自然。建议注意动词形式和句子结构，使回答更简洁流畅。

示例: I am good at memorising study materials, but I often forget small details in my daily life.

建议: 回答中表达不清晰，语法错误影响理解。建议使用更准确的时间表达和句子结构，避免模糊和错误。

示例: Yes, I once forgot to submit my homework before the deadline last week, so my teacher criticized me.

建议: 回答内容不够具体，句子结构混乱。建议明确表达需要记住的具体事项，并使用连词使句子更连贯。

示例: In daily life, I need to remember appointments with others because honesty and punctuality are important.

建议: 回答较为自然，但有语法错误和表达不够简洁。建议注意时态和句子简洁性，提高表达效果。

示例: I often forget daily details, so I keep a diary to record important events every day.

× Uh, for me it's hard to answer this question because I'm really good at remember the things in the study but I always forget the little details in my daily life.

✓ Uh, for me it's hard to answer this question because I'm really good at remembering the things in the study but I always forget the little details in my daily life.

动词短语“good at”后面应接动名词形式，因此“remember”应改为“remembering”。

× Just as they lost a week, I forgot to hand out my homework and pass the deadline so that I was criticized by my teacher.

✓ Just a week ago, I forgot to hand in my homework and missed the deadline, so I was criticized by my teacher.

时间表达不准确，应为“Just a week ago”。“hand out”意为分发，作业应用“hand in”（提交）。“pass the deadline”应为“miss the deadline”。时态和表达需符合过去发生的事件。

× From my point of view, I think I remember the a point with others is very important because we need to be honest and it's better not to be late.

✓ From my point of view, I think remembering appointments with others is very important because we need to be honest and it's better not to be late.

“remember the a point with others”表达不正确，应为“remembering appointments with others”。“remember”后接动名词形式，且“a point”应改为“appointments”（约定）。

× For me, I'm really easy to forget the details in my daily life, so I am keeping a diary and I'd like to record the things happened daily.

✓ For me, I easily forget the details in my daily life, so I keep a diary and I'd like to record the things that happen daily.

“I'm really easy to forget”表达不自然，应改为“I easily forget”。“am keeping”改为一般现在时“keep”，表示习惯动作。最后一句中“things happened daily”缺少关系代词，应为“things that happen daily”。