记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“sketched by a cat”应为“scratched by a cat”。建议注意词汇的准确使用，并简洁明了地表达观点。

示例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, I still clearly remember when I was scratched by a cat during my childhood.

建议: 回答语法混乱，表达不清晰，缺乏连贯性。建议先明确回答，再用简单句子说明原因，避免语法错误。

示例: Yes, I have forgotten something important. For instance, once in junior high school, I got up late and missed an important exam.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和词汇使用不当，如“a everyday, everyday shoot”不明确。建议使用准确的词汇并组织清晰的句子。

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember many things such as my schedule, study tasks, and doing the laundry.

建议: 回答较为自然且结构清晰，但可以增加连接词使表达更流畅，同时丰富细节。

示例: For example, before going to sleep, I usually repeat important information several times so that I can easily remember it the next day.

× Yes, when I was in junior high school because I get up late, I want the actually forgot.

✓ Yes, when I was in junior high school, because I got up late, I actually forgot.

这里的动作发生在过去，动词需要用过去式。'get' 应改为 'got'，'want' 应改为 'actually'，但这里 'want' 是错误用词，应删除或改为 'actually'。整体句子应调整为过去时态。

× In my daily life I need to remember a lot of things such as a everyday, everyday shoot, study and washing the clothes.

✓ In my daily life, I need to remember a lot of things such as everyday tasks, studying, and washing clothes.

'a everyday' 是错误的量词使用，'everyday' 是形容词，不能单独用作名词。'everyday shoot' 可能是错误表达，应改为 'everyday tasks' 或类似表达。'study' 应改为动名词 'studying'，'washing the clothes' 中 'the' 不需要。

× For instance, before going to sleep, I would repeat this important matter again so that I can easily recall it the next day.

✓ For instance, before going to sleep, I would repeat this important matter so that I can easily recall it the next day.

'repeat' 后不需要 'again'，因为 'repeat' 本身就有重复的意思，'again' 是多余的。

× Yes, usually I can remember many things that happened when I was a child. For instance, even now I still remember the time when I was sketched by a cat when I was young.

✓ Yes, usually I can remember many things that happened when I was a child. For instance, even now I still remember the time when I was scratched by a cat when I was young.

'sketched' 是错误的动词，正确的动词是 'scratched'，表示被猫抓伤。

× Yes, when I was in junior high school because I get up late, I want the actually forgot.

✓ Yes, when I was in junior high school, because I got up late, I actually forgot.

原句结构混乱，缺少逗号分隔，且 'want the actually forgot' 语义不清，需调整为正确的过去时态句子。