记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và rõ ràng, nhưng bạn nên tránh câu quá dài và lặp lại ý. Hãy chia câu thành các phần ngắn hơn và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

示例: I'm not very good at memorising things. Therefore, I usually write down important tasks or information to avoid forgetting them. This method has helped me a lot.

建议: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ "I'm get distracted" không đúng. Ngoài ra, hãy thêm từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn.

示例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For example, sometimes I get distracted in class and forget to write down homework details. Because of this, I need to pay more attention.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự mạch lạc và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ nối để làm rõ ý, đồng thời tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như "task" số ít và câu không hoàn chỉnh.

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember my schedule because I have many important tasks to complete each day. Therefore, I write them down carefully and follow my plan exactly.

建议: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu, ví dụ "the important thing I have granted down" không đúng. Hãy sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và từ nối để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

示例: To remember important things, I always take notes on my phone because it is convenient and easy to carry everywhere. This helps me stay organized and prevents me from forgetting important tasks.

× This usually happens when I'm get distracted and I think that I have to notice more carefully.

✓ This usually happens when I get distracted and I think that I have to pay more attention.

The phrase 'I'm get distracted' is incorrect because 'I'm' (I am) should be followed by a present participle verb (verb+ing) to form the present continuous tense, but 'get' is in base form. The correct form is 'I get distracted' (simple present) to match the habitual action. Also, 'notice more carefully' is unnatural; 'pay more attention' is the correct collocation.

× In my daily life I need to remember my schedule because I have many important task to complete each day.

✓ In my daily life I need to remember my schedule because I have many important tasks to complete each day.

The word 'task' should be plural 'tasks' because it is preceded by 'many', which requires a plural noun.

× So I have to make sure and follow the exact. Write them down in their schedule.

✓ So I have to make sure to follow it exactly and write them down in my schedule.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. 'Make sure and follow the exact' is incomplete and lacks an object. Also, 'Write them down in their schedule' is unclear and inconsistent with the speaker's perspective. The corrected sentence combines the ideas clearly and uses proper pronouns.

× For me, I'm not the kind of person who is good at memorizing, so I have to write down some important task or information to make sure I don't forget that this method helped me a lot.

✓ For me, I'm not the kind of person who is good at memorizing, so I have to write down some important tasks or information to make sure I don't forget. This method has helped me a lot.

'Task' should be plural 'tasks' because it refers to multiple items. Also, the sentence is a run-on; it should be split into two sentences for clarity. 'This method helped me a lot' should be in present perfect 'has helped' to indicate an effect continuing to the present.

× This help me to stay organized and so I don't forget anything important.

✓ This helps me to stay organized so I don't forget anything important.

'Help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'This'. Also, 'and so' is redundant; 'so' alone is sufficient to show cause and effect.

× To remember important things I always take notes on my phone because it's very convenient and handy that I can carry it everywhere and follow the exact the important thing I have granted down.

✓ To remember important things, I always take notes on my phone because it's very convenient and handy; I can carry it everywhere and follow exactly the important things I have written down.

The sentence has pronoun and word choice errors. 'Follow the exact the important thing' is incorrect; it should be 'follow exactly the important things'. 'Granted down' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'written down'. Also, the sentence is long and needs punctuation for clarity.