记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答不够连贯，句子结构混乱，表达不自然。建议简化句子，避免重复，使用更准确的表达。

示例: I'm not very good at memorising things, so my mom often reminds me about tasks I've forgotten. This sometimes causes difficulties in my daily life.

建议: 语法错误较多，时态使用不当，表达不清晰。建议注意时态一致，句子完整，表达具体。

示例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For example, once I missed an important group meeting for a class.

建议: 表达基本清楚，但句子结构简单，缺少连接词。建议使用连接词使表达更流畅，并丰富细节。

示例: I need to remember to take my medicine on time and attend classes. Moreover, I usually make a to-do list to keep track of my daily tasks.

建议: 句子结构混乱，表达不完整，语法错误明显。建议分句表达，注意语法和逻辑连贯。

示例: I usually write important tasks on my phone and set reminders to avoid forgetting them. Sometimes, I also tell my parents or friends about these tasks for extra help.

× I'm not so good at memorizing things so my mom will often remind me to do things I've forgotten to do and it also made my life have some difficulties and some time to.

✓ I'm not so good at memorizing things, so my mom often reminds me to do things I've forgotten to do, and it also makes my life have some difficulties sometimes.

句子中时态不一致，前半部分用现在时，后半部分错误地用了过去时'made'，应改为现在时'makes'，以保持时态一致。并且'some time to'表达不清，改为'sometimes'更合适。

× Yeah, I often forgotten something important.

✓ Yeah, I have often forgotten something important.

'forgotten'是过去分词，前面缺少助动词'have'，构成现在完成时，表示过去发生且对现在有影响的动作。

× For example, once I forgotten a very important class.

✓ For example, once I forgot a very important class.

此处应使用一般过去时，'forgot'是动词的过去式，表示过去发生的具体事件。

× It's an appointment of our group members and I remember.

✓ It's an appointment with our group members, and I remember it.

'appointment of our group members'表达不准确，应为'appointment with our group members'。另外，'I remember'后应加宾语'it'，使句子完整。

× I need to remember things like eat medicine, take medicine on time and attend classes.

✓ I need to remember things like taking medicine on time and attending classes.

'like'后应接动名词形式，表示举例，'eat medicine'应改为'taking medicine'。

× Moreover, I need to accomplish the list of my day.

✓ Moreover, I need to accomplish my daily to-do list.

'the list of my day'表达不自然，改为'my daily to-do list'更符合英语习惯。

× I always write them down in my phone to set reminders to make me avoid forgetting something important or else I will told my parents or friends my important task so they cannot.

✓ I always write them down on my phone to set reminders to help me avoid forgetting something important; otherwise, I will tell my parents or friends about my important tasks so they can remind me.

'write down in my phone'应为'write down on my phone'，'make me avoid'表达不自然，改为'help me avoid'更合适。'will told'时态错误，应为'will tell'。句子结构混乱，需分句并调整表达，使意思清晰。