记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中语法和表达不够自然，句子结构混乱，且有重复。建议简化句子，使用更准确的表达，并避免重复。

示例: I'm not very good at memorising things. I can remember short information, but I often forget details after some time.

建议: 回答较为自然，但有语法错误和用词不当，如“forgot”应为“forget”，且“Swatch”应为“smartwatch”。建议注意时态和词汇准确性。

示例: Yes, I often forget where I put my phone. Fortunately, my smartwatch is connected to it, so I can make the phone ring using my watch.

建议: 回答表达不够清晰，“Mostly a small day life”不自然。建议直接列举具体内容，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember things like deadlines, phone numbers, passwords, appointments, and the groceries I need to buy.

建议: 回答较好，表达清晰且内容具体。建议增加连接词使句子更连贯，同时注意“To Do List”应为“to-do list”。

示例: I usually set reminders on my phone and write down a to-do list. Sometimes, I also stick notes on my desk to help me remember important things.

× I have an average memory, some always I can remember shorter things, but I forgot detail, forget details after a while.

✓ I have an average memory; sometimes I can remember short things, but I forget details after a while.

这里'some always'用法错误，应该用'sometimes'表示有时。'shorter things'应改为'short things'，因为比较级不合适。'forgot detail'应为'forget details'，保持时态一致且'details'应为复数。

× Yes I have, I always forgot where I put my phone, does it count?

✓ Yes, I have. I always forget where I put my phone. Does it count?

'forgot'是过去式，但句意表达习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时'forget'。另外，句子之间应分开。

× But luckily my smartwatch is connected so I can make the phone ring by using my Swatch.

✓ But luckily my smartwatch is connected, so I can make the phone ring by using my watch.

'Swatch'是品牌名，可能是拼写错误，应为'watch'。另外，句子中缺少逗号。

× Mostly a small day life. Things like deadlines, phone numbers, passwords, appointments you know, and the grocery I need to buy.

✓ Mostly a small daily life. Things like deadlines, phone numbers, passwords, appointments, you know, and the groceries I need to buy.

'day life'应为'daily life'，形容词形式。'grocery'应为复数形式'groceries'，表示多种杂货。

× I usually set reminders on my phone and write down To Do List.

✓ I usually set reminders on my phone and write down a To-Do List.

'To Do List'前应加冠词'a'，且中间应有连字符，表示一个具体的待办事项列表。