记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more coherent by directly answering the question, using correct grammar, and avoiding redundancy. Also, clarify your points with specific examples and use linking words to connect ideas.

示例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, I can remember people's names, faces, and ages even if I meet them only once. This ability has helped me build good friendships quickly.

建议: Your answer is incomplete and lacks clarity. Make sure to finish your sentences and provide a clear, concise response. Use linking words to organise your answer logically and include specific details to enrich your response.

示例: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. Last year, I was supposed to catch a flight to the United States, but I forgot the exact date and time to go to the airport. As a result, I missed the flight, which was very disappointing.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, followed by specific supporting details. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and avoid vague phrases like 'the hurry thing'.

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember my to-do list because I have many tasks to complete on time. For instance, I have appointments and deadlines that require me to stay organised and focused.

建议: Your answer is confusing and contains grammatical errors. Instead of saying you write things 'on your head', explain your method clearly. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific details about your memory techniques.

示例: I usually write down urgent tasks in a notebook or on my phone. When I check the time, I remind myself of these tasks, which helps me remember important things.

× I can know each others name, face and their ages even we just meet meet each other once and these girls help me to get a good friendship and also.

✓ I can know each other's name, face and their ages even if we just meet each other once, and these girls help me to get a good friendship as well.

The phrase 'each others name' should be 'each other's name' to show possession correctly. Also, 'even we just meet meet each other once' is corrected to 'even if we just meet each other once' to improve clarity and grammar. The plural 'others' needs an apostrophe to indicate possession.

× Yes, I have forgotten something important like last year I need to catch a flight to the United States, but I forget the exact date and the time when I need to go to the airport.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten something important. Last year, I needed to catch a flight to the United States, but I forgot the exact date and the time when I needed to go to the airport.

The verbs 'need' and 'forget' should be in the past tense 'needed' and 'forgot' to match the past time reference 'last year'. This maintains tense consistency in the sentence.

× So I missed that airplane so I really.

✓ So I missed that airplane, so I really regretted it.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb to complete the thought. Adding 'regretted it' completes the sentence and maintains past tense consistency.

× The thing that I need to remember in my daily life because every day I have A to do list and I need to finish all the items on time so I need to remember the hurry thing.

✓ The things that I need to remember in my daily life are because every day I have a to-do list and I need to finish all the items on time, so I need to remember urgent things.

The phrase 'A to do list' should be 'a to-do list' with correct article and hyphenation. 'The hurry thing' is incorrect; 'urgent things' is more appropriate. Also, 'The thing' should be plural 'The things' to match the context.

× I always write down some urgent things on my head and when I need to watch a time I usually notice the thing on my head so it help me to remember the important things.

✓ I always write down some urgent things in my head, and when I need to check the time, I usually notice the things in my head, so it helps me to remember important things.

The preposition 'on my head' is incorrect; 'in my head' is the correct expression. 'Watch a time' should be 'check the time'. Also, 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.