记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答不够自然，语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题，并用具体例子支持观点。

示例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, when I was in high school, I struggled to remember new vocabulary words because there were so many to learn every day.

建议: 回答简洁但缺少细节。建议增加细节描述，如忘记手机的情境和感受，使回答更丰富。

示例: Yes, I once forgot my cell phone on the bus. I realized it only after getting off and felt very worried because I needed it to contact my family.

建议: 回答不够相关且表达不清晰。建议直接回答日常需要记住的事情，并用具体例子说明。

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember my class schedule and assignment deadlines to keep up with my studies.

建议: 回答表达不够流畅，时态使用不当。建议使用现在时态，简洁表达，并说明具体方法。

示例: To remember important things, I usually take notes on my phone or write them down in a notebook. Sometimes, I also use my iPad to keep track of tasks.

× When I was a Senior High School student, the vocabulary that we are members of every day is a lot.

✓ When I was a Senior High School student, the vocabulary that we memorized every day was a lot.

句子中描述过去的情况，应该使用过去时态。原句中使用了现在时态“are members”，不符合时间背景。应将动词改为过去时态“memorized”。

× I can't recalling it very much.

✓ I can't recall it very well.

情态动词“can't”后应接动词原形，不能接动名词“recalling”。此外，“very much”通常用于否定句中修饰动词，表达能力时用“very well”更合适。

× Yes, I have once forgotten my cell phone on the bus.

✓ Yes, I once forgot my cell phone on the bus.

“have once forgotten”结构不自然，且“once”通常与一般过去时连用，表示过去某次发生的动作。应使用一般过去时“forgot”。

× Therefore I must recording this location in my daily life.

✓ Therefore I must record this location in my daily life.

情态动词“must”后应接动词原形，不能接动名词“recording”。

× In order to remember important things, I used to take notes on my notebook on cell phone and sometimes I take note on the paper or iPad.

✓ In order to remember important things, I used to take notes in my notebook or on my cell phone, and sometimes I take notes on paper or an iPad.

“take notes”是固定搭配，后面应使用介词“in”或“on”表示具体载体。原句中“on my notebook on cell phone”表达不清，应改为“in my notebook or on my cell phone”。此外，“take note”应为复数形式“take notes”，且“paper”前应省略冠词或使用“on paper”。