记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答不够完整且有语法错误，表达不够自然。建议回答时注意时态一致，避免句子不完整，并且补充更多细节使回答更丰富。

示例: I wasn't very good at memorising things before, but when I was in junior high school, it was easier for me. For example, in Chinese class, we had to recite long ancient poems, and I could memorise them quickly without much effort. However, now I find it more difficult to memorise things as easily.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误，如时态和动词形式错误。建议简化句子结构，使用连贯的连接词，并且表达更自然。

示例: No, I haven't forgotten anything important because I make a to-do list every day. This helps me remember what I need to do and keeps me organised throughout the day.

建议: 回答有些重复且句子结构不够自然。建议避免重复词汇，使用更流畅的表达，并且可以补充更多具体细节。

示例: As a high school student, I need to remember all my tasks and assignments to complete on time. Additionally, I also keep track of upcoming exams and extracurricular activities.

建议: 回答表达基本清晰，但有语法错误和不连贯的部分。建议注意句子结构，使用合适的连接词，使表达更自然流畅。

示例: Every day, I make a to-do list which helps me remember all the important tasks. Besides that, I also write sticky notes and put them on my door as reminders.

× I think when I am in junior high school, memorizing things was really easy for me.

✓ I think when I was in junior high school, memorizing things was really easy for me.

这里描述的是过去的时间点，应该使用过去时态"was"，而不是现在时态"am"。

× For instance, every Chinese when I in Chinese class we had to recite some very long ancient poems and I can memorize them completely without spending much time.

✓ For instance, every time when I was in Chinese class, we had to recite some very long ancient poems and I could memorize them completely without spending much time.

句子结构混乱，缺少动词"was"，且时态应统一为过去时，"can"应改为过去时态"could"。

× But now my memory.

✓ But now my memory is not as good.

句子不完整，缺少谓语动词，导致表达不清楚。需要补充谓语使句子完整。

× No, I haven't forget something important because every day I will make A to do list to know what I should what I need to do this day, so it can help me to remember all the things and I can also notice what things I need to do.

✓ No, I haven't forgotten something important because every day I make a to-do list to know what I should do and what I need to do that day, so it helps me remember all the things and I can also notice what things I need to do.

"haven't forget"应为现在完成时的过去分词形式"haven't forgotten"。"will make"改为一般现在时"make"，因为是习惯动作。句中"A to do list"应为"a to-do list"。句子中"what I should what I need to do this day"结构重复且不完整，需调整。

× No, I haven't forget something important because every day I will make A to do list to know what I should what I need to do this day, so it can help me to remember all the things and I can also notice what things I need to do.

✓ No, I haven't forgotten something important because every day I make a to-do list to know what I should do and what I need to do that day, so it helps me remember all the things and I can also notice what things I need to do.

"make a to-do list to know"中"to know"用法不当，建议改为"to know what I should do"，使表达更自然。

× Every day I will make A to do list so which helps me to remember everything important to do in the day and also I'll write a sticky note to stick on my door.

✓ Every day I make a to-do list which helps me remember everything important to do that day, and I also write a sticky note to stick on my door.

"A to do list"中的"A"应为小写"a"，且"to do list"应连写为"to-do list"。"so which helps"结构不正确，改为"which helps"即可。

× Every day I will make A to do list so which helps me to remember everything important to do in the day and also I'll write a sticky note to stick on my door.

✓ Every day I make a to-do list which helps me remember everything important to do that day, and I also write a sticky note to stick on my door.

"stick on my door"中"on"用法正确，但句子整体表达更流畅时可保持不变。