记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，存在重复和错误，建议加强语法基础，避免重复词汇，回答应更简洁自然。

示例: I wish I had a better memory. I'm good at remembering people's faces and song lyrics, but I often forget what I study for exams because I find it hard to remember boring information.

建议: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够连贯，建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并注意时态和单复数。

示例: Yes, I once forgot my friend's birthday and only remembered it the next day. I felt very guilty, so I bought a big cake to make up for it. Fortunately, she forgave me, and since then, I try to keep all important dates in my calendar.

建议: 回答内容较完整，但表达有些不自然，建议注意句子结构和词汇搭配，使表达更地道。

示例: As a student, I need to remember deadlines for each subject, exam preparation schedules, and group presentations or meetings. To help me, I put all this information into my planner.

建议: 回答中有语法和表达错误，建议注意动词形式和句子完整性，使用更准确的表达方式。

示例: I usually use my phone to remind me or put notes in the calendar. This really helps me remember and organize all the things I need to do, so I rarely forget important tasks. I'm grateful for technology.

× I'm really good at remembering peoples faces and some lyrics but I'm trouble to read but but I'm always forgot what I study for exam.

✓ I'm really good at remembering people's faces and some lyrics but I'm troubled to read and I'm always forgetting what I study for exams.

“peoples faces”中“peoples”应为所有格形式“people's”，表示“人们的脸”。“I'm trouble to read”应为“I'm troubled to read”，因为“trouble”作为形容词时应使用过去分词形式。动词时态应保持一致，使用现在进行时“forgetting”更符合语境。

× I'm always forgot what I study for exam.

✓ I'm always forgetting what I study for exams.

“always forgot”时态错误，应使用现在进行时“always forgetting”表示经常发生的动作。

× Yes absolutely, one time I just forgot my friend's birthday and I just remembering it after that day so I I feel so guilty.

✓ Yes absolutely, one time I just forgot my friend's birthday and I only remembered it after that day so I felt so guilty.

“just remembering”应为过去时“only remembered”，与前文“forgot”时态一致。“I feel”应为过去时“felt”，因为描述的是过去的感受。

× I brought a big cake for her try to make up for it.

✓ I brought a big cake for her to try to make up for it.

缺少不定式“to”连接动词短语，正确表达目的。

× Luckily she forgave me but after that I tried to put all my information.

✓ Luckily she forgave me but after that I tried to put all my information together.

“put all my information”后应加副词“together”表示整理信息。

× This subjects schedules what I need to prepare for exams and also I need to keep track on the group presentation and meetings.

✓ These subjects schedule what I need to prepare for exams and also I need to keep track of the group presentations and meetings.

“This subjects”应为复数指示代词“These subjects”。“schedules”应为动词原形“schedule”与复数主语一致。介词“keep track on”应为“keep track of”。“presentation”应为复数“presentations”。

× So for helping me I put all the information in schedule.

✓ So to help me, I put all the information in the schedule.

“for helping me”应改为不定式“to help me”表示目的。缺少定冠词“the”修饰“schedule”。

× Well I usually use my to remind me or put notes in the calendar.

✓ Well I usually use my phone to remind me or put notes in the calendar.

“use my”后缺少宾语，应补充“phone”或具体物品。

× It really helps me to remembering and organize all the things I need to do.

✓ It really helps me to remember and organize all the things I need to do.

“helps me to remembering”中“remembering”应为动词原形“remember”，不定式后动词用原形。

× So I may probably forgot any of these things I put in.

✓ So I may probably forget any of these things I put in.

“may probably forgot”时态错误，应为“may probably forget”，情态动词后接动词原形。