记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to give a clear and direct answer first, then explain briefly with simple and correct sentences. Avoid unclear phrases like 'good baby memorizing' and 'normalize in each and every particular part'. Use natural expressions and keep your answer concise.

示例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things because I find it difficult to remember details. For example, I often forget names or dates, which can be frustrating.

建议: Answer directly and use correct grammar. Avoid confusing phrases like 'you very important things' and 'each and everything better than others'. Provide a clear example and explain why you forgot it.

示例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For instance, I once forgot my ID number because I didn't memorise it properly, even though most people remember theirs easily.

建议: Make your answer clearer and more natural. Use correct tense and vocabulary, for example, 'date' instead of 'dead time'. Start with a direct answer and then add details with linking words.

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember important things like the date and appointments. For example, I often check my calendar to avoid forgetting important events.

建议: Use clear and correct expressions. Instead of 'lodged it before the day', say 'I prepare in advance'. Use linking words to connect ideas and explain your methods clearly.

示例: I usually prepare in advance and review important information several times. Also, I set reminders on my phone and make calls to help me remember important tasks.

× Actually not.

✓ Actually, no.

The phrase 'Actually not' is incorrect because 'not' is used to negate verbs or adjectives, but here it is used alone. The correct response to a question like 'Are you good at memorising things?' is 'Actually, no.' which is a proper negation. Adding a comma after 'Actually' improves clarity.

× I'm good baby memorizing things because it's very tough for me to normalize in each and every particular part in these things.

✓ I'm not good at memorizing things because it's very tough for me to focus on each and every particular part of these things.

The phrase 'good baby memorizing things' is incorrect; 'baby' is misplaced and does not fit the context. The correct phrase is 'good at memorizing things.' Also, 'normalize' is incorrect here; the intended meaning is likely 'focus' or 'concentrate.' The preposition 'in' should be 'on' when referring to focusing on parts. The phrase 'in these things' is better as 'of these things.'

× I've forgotten you very important things in my life.

✓ I've forgotten some very important things in my life.

The pronoun 'you' is incorrect here; it should be 'some' to indicate an unspecified quantity of important things. 'You' is a second-person pronoun and does not fit the context.

× Each and everyone almost know the ID number and exact number, but I forgot that because I haven't memorized each and everything better than others.

✓ Everyone almost knows the ID number and exact number, but I forgot it because I haven't memorized everything better than others.

The phrase 'Each and everyone' is incorrect; 'Everyone' is sufficient. 'Know' should be 'knows' to agree with the singular subject 'Everyone' (subject-verb agreement). 'That' should be 'it' referring to the ID number. 'Each and everything' is incorrect; 'everything' alone is appropriate here.

× Actually I need to remember in daily life was the day, dead time and everything.

✓ Actually, I need to remember in daily life the day, date, time, and everything.

The phrase 'remember in daily life was' is incorrect; 'was' is unnecessary and incorrect here. 'Dead time' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'date and time.' The preposition 'in' is correct with 'daily life,' but the sentence structure needs correction for clarity.

× And because I forgot the date and the day also, that's the very important thing.

✓ And because I forgot the date and the day, those are very important things.

The pronoun 'that's' (that is) is singular but refers to two items ('date and day'), so it should be plural 'those are.' Also, 'very important thing' should be plural 'things' to match the plural subject.

× First of all, I like to remember in my daily life.

✓ First of all, I like to remember things in my daily life.

The verb 'remember' usually takes an object; 'remember in my daily life' is incomplete. Adding 'things' clarifies what is to be remembered. The preposition 'in' is correct here.

× Actually, I lodged it before the day and see the least each and every times.

✓ Actually, I noted it before the day and see it at least every time.

The verb 'lodged' is incorrect; the intended word is likely 'noted' or 'logged.' The phrase 'before the day' is unclear but likely means 'before the day comes.' 'See the least each and every times' is incorrect; it should be 'see it at least every time' or 'see it frequently.' 'Times' should be singular 'time' or plural 'times' with correct quantifiers.

× Uh, that's why only I get into remembering things and other than that I make reminders and, uh, calls also.

✓ Uh, that's why I only get into remembering things, and other than that, I make reminders and, uh, calls as well.

The phrase 'that's why only I get into' is awkward; 'I only get into' is better. Adding commas improves readability. 'Calls also' is better expressed as 'calls as well.'