记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: თქვენი პასუხი უნდა იყოს უფრო ბუნებრივი და ნაკლებად განმეორებითი. სცადეთ თავიდან აიცილოთ ზედმეტი სიტყვები და გამოიყენოთ ლინკი სიტყვები, რათა პასუხი იყოს ლოგიკური და თანმიმდევრული.

示例: To be honest, I'm not very good at memorizing things because I often forget what I learn within a few days. I find it unnecessary to remember everything, but sometimes I wish I knew how to improve my memory.

建议: თქვენი პასუხი უნდა იყოს უფრო სრულყოფილი და დეტალური. გამოიყენეთ ლინკი სიტყვები, რათა გაამყაროთ თქვენი აზრი და თავიდან აიცილოთ სიტყვების გამეორება.

示例: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For example, one stressful day I was supposed to write a report about my job, but I completely forgot to do it, which caused me a lot of trouble.

建议: თქვენი პასუხი უნდა იყოს უფრო ბუნებრივი და ნაკლებად განმეორებითი. გამოიყენეთ ლინკი სიტყვები და უფრო კონკრეტული დეტალები, რათა გაამყაროთ თქვენი აზრი.

示例: I try to remember everything in my daily life because I believe every moment is important. When I get older, I want to look back and recall all the experiences I've had.

建议: თქვენი პასუხი უნდა იყოს უფრო პოზიტიური და დეტალური. სცადეთ გამოიყენოთ ლინკი სიტყვები და კონკრეტული მაგალითები იმის შესახებ, თუ როგორ ცდილობთ დაიმახსოვროთ მნიშვნელოვანი რამ.

示例: I have a poor memory, so I try to use reminders and notes to help me remember important things. Sometimes, I also take medicine to improve my memory, but I mainly rely on organizing my tasks carefully.

× I often forget forget it especially in few days and it is very unnecessary for me.

✓ I often forget it especially within a few days and it is very unnecessary for me.

The phrase 'in few days' is incorrect; it should be 'within a few days' to indicate the time frame properly. Also, the repeated word 'forget' is a typographical error. The verb 'forget' is correctly used in the present tense here to describe a habitual action.

× But I don't want I don't know what to do.

✓ But I don't know what to do.

The phrase 'I don't want I don't know what to do' is ungrammatical and confusing. The correct structure is 'I don't know what to do' to express uncertainty. The phrase 'I don't want' is unnecessary and disrupts sentence clarity.

× One day I have to write a book about about my job and I forgot to write it.

✓ One day I had to write a book about my job and I forgot to write it.

The phrase 'I have to write' should be in the past tense 'I had to write' to match the past context indicated by 'One day' and 'I forgot'. Also, the repeated word 'about' is a typographical error.

× especially in few days

✓ especially within a few days

The preposition 'in' is incorrect here; 'within' is the appropriate preposition to indicate a time frame that is less than or equal to a certain number of days.

× I want to remind everything what happened in my life.

✓ I want to remember everything that happened in my life.

The verb 'remind' is incorrectly used; 'remember' is the correct verb to express recalling past events. Also, 'what happened' should be 'that happened' to correctly introduce the relative clause.

× when I will be older

✓ when I am older

In time clauses introduced by 'when', the present tense is used to refer to the future, so 'will be' should be 'am'.

× I don't remember important things, I have very bad memory.

✓ I don't remember important things; I have a very bad memory.

A semicolon or period is needed to separate two independent clauses. Also, 'very bad memory' requires the article 'a' before 'very bad memory'.

× I want to know everything but I can't and sometimes I I receive medicines to resolve this problem.

✓ I want to know everything but I can't, and sometimes I take medicine to resolve this problem.

The phrase 'I receive medicines' is unnatural; 'take medicine' is the correct collocation. Also, 'medicine' is usually uncountable in this context, so 'medicines' is incorrect. The repeated 'I' is a typographical error.