记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Jawaban Anda agak membingungkan dan kurang terstruktur dengan baik. Cobalah untuk memberikan jawaban yang lebih langsung dan jelas, serta hindari kalimat yang berbelit-belit. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih sederhana dan fokus pada kemampuan menghafal Anda secara spesifik.

示例: Yes, I am good at memorising things because I often study subjects that require remembering facts, such as social science and business. This helps me improve my memory skills.

建议: Jawaban Anda sudah cukup jelas, tetapi kalimatnya agak panjang dan kurang teratur. Cobalah untuk menggunakan kalimat yang lebih singkat dan gunakan kata penghubung yang tepat agar jawaban lebih koheren.

示例: Yes, I have forgotten something important recently. For example, I thought I parked my car in the lobby, but my dad called me and told me I had parked in the wrong place.

建议: Jawaban Anda sudah cukup baik, tetapi ada beberapa kesalahan tata bahasa dan penggunaan kata. Cobalah untuk memperbaiki struktur kalimat dan gunakan kata yang lebih tepat untuk menjelaskan ide Anda.

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember my goals for the day because I enjoy planning. Having clear goals helps me stay calm and focused throughout the day.

建议: Jawaban Anda kurang alami dan ada pengulangan yang tidak perlu. Cobalah untuk membuat kalimat yang lebih alami dan jelas, serta hindari penggunaan kata yang tidak umum seperti 'rememberedness'.

示例: I usually remember important things by writing notes on my phone or in my journal because writing helps me recall information better.

× I think so, yes, because my major in high school is social science and my major aligning with high schools is business, so I think memorizing is one of my strength.

✓ I think so, yes, because my major in high school is social science and my major aligning with high schools is business, so I think memorizing is one of my strengths.

The word 'strength' should be plural 'strengths' because it refers to one of multiple abilities or strong points. In English, when referring to one item among many, the noun should be plural.

× Yes, so recently I forgot to park my car in the lobby because I felt that I already parked my car in the right place.

✓ Yes, so recently I forgot to park my car in the lobby because I felt that I had already parked my car in the right place.

The past perfect tense 'had already parked' is needed here to indicate that the action of parking happened before the feeling of forgetting. Using simple past 'parked' is less clear about the sequence of events.

× The most important thing to remember in my daily life is my goal in a day because one of the thing that I really enjoy the most is planning.

✓ The most important thing to remember in my daily life is my goal in a day because one of the things that I really enjoy the most is planning.

The phrase 'one of the thing' is incorrect because 'one of the' must be followed by a plural noun. Therefore, 'thing' should be pluralized to 'things'.

× When remembering important things, I tend to write notes in my phone or in my journal because I'm the person.

✓ When remembering important things, I tend to write notes in my phone or in my journal because I'm that kind of person.

The phrase 'I'm the person' is incomplete and unnatural. The correct expression is 'I'm that kind of person' to indicate a type or category of person.

× I'm the type of person that needs to remember by writing, so it will improve my rememberedness.

✓ I'm the type of person that needs to remember by writing, so it will improve my memory.

The word 'rememberedness' is not a correct English word. The correct noun to express the ability to remember is 'memory'.