记忆Part 1 评分报告

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Part 1

考官

Are you good at memorising things?

考生

Yes, I'm good at memorizing things. For example, since then I have still remember some things that I played with my best friends in details and I know what the weather is today and what time is it today and what games.

考官

Have you ever forgotten something important?

考生

Well yes, I have forgot the date of the examination last year in my school because I oversleep and the last the last evening I have not set the alarm so I forgot the date of the exam.

考官

What do you need to remember in your daily life?

考生

Maybe it depends on different situations. If I am in the university, I should remember what time I should go to the class and the time of the examination which I need to attend, and if I'm in a home, I should remember what time I should get up and what time to.

考官

How do you remember important things?

考生

I like to taking some notes on my cell phones or smart phones because it is very handy and convenient. I can check it anywhere at any time and it is very useful to clear my mind and record the reflections.

评估

总分

总分: 6.0流畅度与连贯性: 6.0发音: 6.0语法: 5.5词汇: 6.0

Part 1

Are you good at memorising things?

分数: 60.0

建议: 你的回答有些语法错误,表达不够清晰,且内容有些混乱。建议简洁明了地回答问题,避免重复和不必要的信息,同时注意时态和句子结构。

示例: Yes, I am good at memorizing things. For example, I can still remember the games I played with my best friends in detail, as well as the weather and time today.

Have you ever forgotten something important?

分数: 65.0

建议: 回答中存在语法错误,如“have forgot”应为“have forgotten”,句子结构不够流畅。建议使用正确的时态,简洁表达原因,并避免重复。

示例: Yes, I have forgotten an important exam date last year because I overslept and forgot to set my alarm the night before.

What do you need to remember in your daily life?

分数: 55.0

建议: 回答不完整且句子未结束,表达不清晰。建议完整回答问题,使用连贯的句子,并具体说明需要记住的事项。

示例: It depends on the situation. At university, I need to remember my class and exam times. At home, I have to remember when to wake up and other daily tasks.

How do you remember important things?

分数: 70.0

建议: 回答表达基本清楚,但有语法错误,如“like to taking”应为“like to take”。建议注意动词形式,句子更简洁自然。

示例: I like to take notes on my smartphone because it is handy and convenient. I can check them anytime and it helps me remember important things.

语法

Verb in the present participle form

× I like to taking some notes on my cell phones or smart phones because it is very handy and convenient.

I like to take some notes on my cell phones or smart phones because it is very handy and convenient.

动词不定式to后面应接动词原形,不能用动名词taking。这里应使用to take。

Past tense issue

× Well yes, I have forgot the date of the examination last year in my school because I oversleep and the last the last evening I have not set the alarm so I forgot the date of the exam.

Well yes, I forgot the date of the examination last year in my school because I overslept and the last evening I had not set the alarm so I forgot the date of the exam.

过去发生的动作应使用一般过去时,have forgot是错误的,正确形式是forgot。oversleep的过去式是overslept,过去完成时用had not set。

Present tense issue

× For example, since then I have still remember some things that I played with my best friends in details and I know what the weather is today and what time is it today and what games.

For example, since then I still remember some things that I played with my best friends in detail and I know what the weather is today and what time it is today and what games.

have still remember应为still remember,动词remember不加have。in details应为in detail,detail作不可数名词。what time is it应改为what time it is,语序错误。

Sentence structure errors

× Maybe it depends on different situations. If I am in the university, I should remember what time I should go to the class and the time of the examination which I need to attend, and if I'm in a home, I should remember what time I should get up and what time to.

Maybe it depends on different situations. If I am at the university, I should remember what time I should go to class and the time of the examination which I need to attend, and if I'm at home, I should remember what time I should get up and what time to get up.

介词用法错误,应该用at the university和at home。go to the class应为go to class,the class不需要冠词。句子末尾不完整,补充完整。

重点词汇

BestFinest; To the highest standard
ClearUnderstandable; Obvious; Transparent; Bright; Unobstructed
DifferentDissimilar; Distinct; Unusual
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
UsefulFunctional; Beneficial
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