记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议使用更自然流畅的句子结构，避免重复和冗余。可以先直接回答问题，然后用具体的例子或原因支持观点。

示例: Yes, I am good at memorising things. For example, I can easily recall important dates and events, which helps me stay confident and positive.

建议: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，建议直接回答问题并用具体例子说明，避免模糊和重复。

示例: No, I have never forgotten anything important because I always pay close attention and use reminders to help me remember.

建议: 回答中表达混乱且有重复，建议使用清晰的句子结构，直接列举需要记住的具体物品，并避免语法错误。

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember small things like my passport, glasses, and keys, as I often forget them.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和表达不流畅的问题，建议使用正确的时态和句型，清晰描述记忆方法。

示例: When I need to remember important things, I make a list on my phone and also write them down on paper, which helps me remember better.

× I always remember a lot of things which happened to me and that things makes me to me.

✓ I always remember a lot of things which happened to me and those things make me who I am.

这里“that things”中“things”是复数，应该用复数指示代词“those”，且谓语动词应与复数主语一致，改为“make”。

× that things makes me to me.

✓ those things make me who I am.

“makes me to me”表达不正确，应改为“make me who I am”表示“使我成为我自己”。

× Not we, not at all.

✓ No, not at all.

“Not we”语法错误，应使用否定副词“No”来回答。

× I'm good at memory things so I just quite feel to forgot things.

✓ I'm good at memorizing things so I rarely forget things.

“memory things”应改为动名词短语“memorizing things”；“just quite feel to forgot”表达不通顺，应改为“rarely forget”。

× I just quite feel to forgot things.

✓ I just rarely forget things.

“forgot”是过去式，句中应使用一般现在时“forget”，且“feel to forgot”结构错误。

× Well in my daily life I just need to remember something very small like my airports, my glasses, my my keys is always I always forget them.

✓ Well, in my daily life I just need to remember small things like my passport, my glasses, and my keys because I always forget them.

“airports”应为“passport”（护照）；“my my keys is always”主谓不一致，应改为“my keys because I always forget them”。

× my my keys is always I always forget them.

✓ my keys because I always forget them.

重复“my my”错误，应删除多余的“my”；“is always”与复数“keys”不一致，应改为“because I always forget them”。

× I will do a list on my phone and and in a paper to write down them which made me memories them.

✓ I will make a list on my phone and on paper to write down things which help me remember them.

“do a list”应改为“make a list”；“in a paper”应改为“on paper”；“write down them”应改为“write down things”；“made me memories them”表达错误，应改为“help me remember them”。