记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it is slightly repetitive and could be more concise. Try to avoid repeating the same idea and use linking words to make your response more coherent. Also, include a specific example to enrich your answer.

示例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things because I enjoy keeping my brain active. For instance, during my studies, I often memorise important facts which helps me perform well in exams.

建议: Your answer is relevant and provides a specific example, which is good. However, try to use linking words to improve the flow and avoid repeating similar phrases like 'had forgotten' and 'was able to'. Also, try to be more concise.

示例: Yes, I once forgot my entire speech during a school competition because of anxiety. However, after calming myself down, I managed to recall some key points and continued confidently.

建议: Your answer covers the topic well but could be more structured and concise. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'such as' to connect ideas smoothly. Also, correct minor grammatical errors and avoid redundancy.

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember various tasks such as college projects and internship assignments. For example, as a content creator, I follow a content calendar to ensure I post regularly.

建议: Your answer is clear and specific, which is good. To improve, try to use linking words like 'for instance' or 'also' to connect your ideas better. Also, avoid minor grammatical mistakes such as 'where' instead of 'wherein' or 'in which'.

示例: I remember important things by organising my tasks using a To Do List, notebook, sticky notes, and an alarm clock app. For instance, the app reminds me at specific times to complete my tasks.

× Yes, I had an instance where I had forgotten something important.

✓ Yes, I had an instance where I forgot something important.

The past perfect tense 'had forgotten' is unnecessary here because the sentence refers to a simple past event. Using simple past 'forgot' is appropriate to describe a past event without needing to indicate it happened before another past event.

× It was during a speech competition during my school years where I had to speak for a long time for a certain topic.

✓ It was during a speech competition in my school years where I had to speak for a long time on a certain topic.

The phrase 'during my school years' is better expressed as 'in my school years' to indicate the time period. Also, 'for a certain topic' should be 'on a certain topic' because we speak 'on' a topic. The past perfect 'had to speak' is acceptable here as it refers to a past obligation during that time.

× I had forgotten the entire speech due to anxiety, but I was able to retain information after I was able to relax myself.

✓ I forgot the entire speech due to anxiety, but I was able to retain information after I was able to relax myself.

The past perfect 'had forgotten' is unnecessary because the event is simply a past action. Using simple past 'forgot' is more appropriate. The rest of the sentence is correct.

× Be it college projects, internship tasks, I have to remember them to be get done.

✓ Be it college projects or internship tasks, I have to remember them to get done.

The phrase 'Be it college projects, internship tasks' should use 'or' to connect the items properly. Also, 'to be get done' is incorrect; it should be 'to get done' to express the purpose of remembering.

× While for my content creation I have to remember my content calendar to adhere to it.

✓ As for my content creation, I have to remember my content calendar to adhere to it.

The phrase 'While for my content creation' is awkward and incorrect. 'As for my content creation' is the correct expression to introduce the topic. The rest of the sentence is correct.

× I remember important things by organizing my to do tasks into my To Do List, notebook, sticky notes and alarm clock application.

✓ I remember important things by organizing my to-do tasks into my To Do List, notebook, sticky notes, and alarm clock application.

The phrase 'to do tasks' should be hyphenated as 'to-do tasks' to function as a compound adjective. Also, a comma is needed before 'and' in the list for clarity.

× All of them where I list down the things that need to be done.

✓ All of them are where I list down the things that need to be done.

The sentence is missing the verb 'are' to link the subject and predicate. 'Where' is correct as it refers to the places where the listing happens.

× The alarm clock app helps me to set alarm for certain time to remind me to get it done.

✓ The alarm clock app helps me to set an alarm for a certain time to remind me to get it done.

The sentence is missing the articles 'an' before 'alarm' and 'a' before 'certain time'. Articles are necessary here to specify the noun properly.