记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答不够完整且表达不流畅，句子结构不完整，建议使用完整句子表达观点，并且避免重复和语法错误。

示例: I am not very good at memorising things nowadays. Although I used to have a better memory when I was younger, I find it harder to remember details as I get older.

建议: 回答中断断续续，语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地叙述事件，使用连贯的句子和适当的连接词。

示例: Yes, I once forgot my girlfriend's birthday last year. I didn't celebrate it or buy her a gift, which made me feel very sorry.

建议: 表达有些混乱，语法和用词不准确。建议使用清晰的句子结构，准确表达需要记住的内容，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember the details of my laboratory projects. Sometimes, my supervisor only explains the instructions once, so I have to remember the specific problems and solutions carefully.

建议: 回答重复且表达不清晰，建议简洁明了地说明记忆方法，避免重复，并使用恰当的词汇。

示例: Usually, I take notes on my phone to remember important things. I write down the details and review them when necessary, which helps me a lot.

× Actually I have a bad memorizing ability.

✓ Actually, I have a bad memory ability.

这里应使用名词'memory'而不是动名词'memorizing'，因为表达的是能力的名词形式。

× In the past I have a great memory ability, but as I grow older I find I have.

✓ In the past, I had a great memory ability, but as I grow older, I find I don't have it anymore.

描述过去的情况应使用过去时'had'，并且句子不完整，需补充完整表达。

× Of course I, I forgot, uh, I, I forgot a sense that my girlfriend's birthday, it is last year that I, I forgot to celebration, celebrate her birthday and uh, uh, uh, a gift for her.

✓ Of course, I forgot my girlfriend's birthday last year. I forgot to celebrate her birthday and to buy a gift for her.

过去发生的事情应使用过去时，'forgot'正确，但'celebration'应改为动词形式'celebrate'，并且句子结构混乱需简化。

× I forgot a sense that my girlfriend's birthday

✓ I forgot that it was my girlfriend's birthday

这里'sense that'用法不当，应直接用'that'引导宾语从句。

× I forgot to celebration, celebrate her birthday and uh, uh, uh, a gift for her.

✓ I forgot to celebrate her birthday and to buy a gift for her.

'celebration'是名词，句中应使用动词不定式'to celebrate'，并补充动词'buy'表达买礼物。

× Actually I need to remember the project details of my work in my laboratory, because sometimes you may advise only tell the details only once for me.

✓ Actually, I need to remember the project details of my work in my laboratory, because sometimes you may only tell me the details once.

'advise'用法错误，应去掉；'tell the details only once for me'结构不正确，应改为'tell me the details once'。

× So I must to remember the extreme details about the questions and the solutions of my project.

✓ So I must remember the exact details about the questions and the solutions of my project.

情态动词'must'后面不加'to'，'extreme'用词不当，应为'exact'表示准确的。

× Usually I will take a note on my phone, I will write the things that I need to remember on my phone and I will record it when I need new IT and when I need to know it, it is helpful.

✓ Usually, I will take notes on my phone. I write the things that I need to remember on my phone and record them when I need to review. It is helpful.

'take a note'应为复数'take notes'，'record it when I need new IT'表达不清，应改为'record them when I need to review'。