记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'make me problems'. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ví dụ, bạn có thể nói rõ bạn không giỏi ghi nhớ và giải thích lý do kèm ví dụ cụ thể.

示例: I'm not very good at memorising things, especially detailed information. For example, I often forget important deadlines and appointments, which causes me stress and problems.

建议: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt tự nhiên hơn. Câu trả lời nên có câu chủ đề rõ ràng và tránh lỗi như 'I not remember'. Ngoài ra, ví dụ nên rõ ràng và liên quan hơn. Bạn nên dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc.

示例: To be honest, I can't clearly remember any important things I've forgotten. However, if I did forget something like a deadline or appointment, I would feel very frustrated and anxious because it would cause problems in my daily life.

建议: Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'colleges' thay vì 'colleagues'. Câu trả lời cần mạch lạc hơn với liên từ phù hợp. Ngoài ra, nên cụ thể hơn về cách bạn sử dụng công nghệ để ghi nhớ.

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember many things such as my subjects, my family members' birthdays, and important appointments or deadlines. Remembering these helps me maintain good relationships with my family and colleagues. To do this, I usually use my smartphone and other technology to keep track of important information.

建议: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp như 'subways' và 'California go out'. Bạn nên dùng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lỗi và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc. Hãy mô tả cụ thể cách bạn ghi nhớ thông tin.

示例: I have several ways to remember important information. For example, I use my phone to take notes or write things down in my notebook, which I always carry with me when I go out.

× I often forget special deadlines and appointments which make me problems and stress for example.

✓ I often forget special deadlines and appointments which cause me problems and stress, for example.

The phrase 'make me problems and stress' is incorrect because 'make' is not the appropriate verb here. The correct verb is 'cause' when referring to something that brings about problems or stress. Also, 'problems' is plural and should be matched with the correct verb form. The sentence is corrected to use 'cause me problems and stress' to express the intended meaning clearly.

× To be honest, I not remember clearly any important things I forgot, but if I did, I would feel very frustrated and anxious.

✓ To be honest, I do not remember clearly any important things I forgot, but if I did, I would feel very frustrated and anxious.

The sentence 'I not remember' is grammatically incorrect because the auxiliary verb 'do' is missing for negation in the present tense. The correct form is 'I do not remember'. This is a common error in forming negative sentences in the present simple tense.

× Honestly, there are lots of information I have to remember in my daily life, subjects, my family members birthday or my significant appointment and deadline.

✓ Honestly, there is a lot of information I have to remember in my daily life, such as subjects, my family members' birthdays, or my significant appointments and deadlines.

The word 'information' is an uncountable noun and should be treated as singular, so 'there are lots of information' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'there is a lot of information'. Also, 'family members birthday' should be plural possessive 'family members' birthdays' to indicate birthdays belonging to multiple family members. Similarly, 'appointment and deadline' should be plural to match the context.

× Remembering this thing will help me to strengthen our family relationship and colleges.

✓ Remembering these things will help me to strengthen our family relationships and colleagues.

The word 'colleges' is incorrect in this context; the intended word is 'colleagues' meaning coworkers or associates. Also, 'family relationship' should be plural 'family relationships' to indicate multiple relationships within the family. Additionally, 'this thing' is vague and should be pluralized to 'these things' to refer to multiple items mentioned earlier.

× There's a lot subways for me to keep in mind information like use my phone to take notes or just something there on my notebook and always bring it when I California go out.

✓ There are a lot of ways for me to keep information in mind, like using my phone to take notes or just writing something in my notebook and always bringing it when I go out in California.

The phrase 'a lot subways' is incorrect; 'subways' is not the correct word here. The intended word is likely 'ways' or 'methods'. Also, 'keep in mind information' is awkward; 'keep information in mind' is correct. The phrase 'use my phone' should be 'using my phone' to match the gerund form after 'like'. 'Just something there on my notebook' is incorrect; it should be 'just writing something in my notebook'. The phrase 'when I California go out' is incorrect word order; it should be 'when I go out in California'.