记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: حاول تكون إجابتك أوضح ومنظمة أكتر، وابتعد عن التكرار والكلام غير المكتمل. ركز على إجابة السؤال بشكل مباشر مع أمثلة واضحة ومترابطة.

示例: Yes, I am good at memorising things. For example, when I was a child, I used to solve puzzles with my big sister, which helped improve my memory. Also, I am good at remembering biology facts for school.

建议: حاول تضيف تفاصيل أكتر عن الموقف وتأثيره عليك، واستخدم كلمات ربط علشان تكون الإجابة مترابطة وواضحة.

示例: Yes, I once forgot my passport in the hotel while traveling to Iraq with my family. It was a stressful day because I couldn't leave the hotel until I found it.

建议: حاول ترد بإجابة أكثر منطقية ومترابطة، ووضح أهمية الحاجة اللي لازم تفتكرها في حياتك اليومية مع أمثلة.

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember to brush my teeth every night because it helps keep my teeth healthy and prevents cavities.

建议: حاول تستخدم جمل كاملة وواضحة، ووضح الطرق اللي بتستخدمها بشكل منظم مع ربط الأفكار بكلمات مناسبة.

示例: I remember important things by writing notes on small pieces of paper and sticking them on my door. Sometimes, I also ask my sister to remind me about important tasks.

× I'm good at biology and I used when I was a kid to solve puzzles with my big sister football, and she was awful in it.

✓ I'm good at biology and I used to solve puzzles with my big sister when I was a kid, and she was awful at football.

The phrase 'I used when I was a kid to solve puzzles' is incorrect. The correct form is 'I used to solve puzzles' to indicate a past habit. Also, the sentence structure was confusing and needed reordering for clarity. Additionally, 'awful in it' should be 'awful at football' to use the correct preposition.

× I'm good at biology and I used when I was a kid to solve puzzles with my big sister football, and she was awful in it.

✓ I'm good at biology and I used to solve puzzles with my big sister when I was a kid, and she was awful at football.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used with 'awful'. The correct preposition is 'at' when referring to skills or activities, so it should be 'awful at football'.

× I always. When when one.

✓ [Sentence unclear and incomplete, unable to correct without more context.]

The sentence is incomplete and does not form a coherent thought, making it impossible to correct without additional context.

× Yeah, I forgot my passport in the hotel when I went with my family to Iraq and it was an awful day.

✓ Yeah, I forgot my passport at the hotel when I went with my family to Iraq, and it was an awful day.

The preposition 'in' is less appropriate than 'at' when referring to a hotel as a location where something was left. Also, adding a comma before 'and' improves sentence clarity.

× I need to remember how to brush my teeth because I always sleep without brushing.

✓ I need to remember to brush my teeth because I always sleep without brushing them.

The phrase 'remember how to brush' is incorrect here; it should be 'remember to brush' to indicate the action to be done. Also, adding 'them' clarifies the object of brushing.

× By writing it in a small notes and. By writing it down in my door wall and sometimes I ask my sister to tell it to me.

✓ By writing notes and by writing them down on my door wall, and sometimes I ask my sister to remind me.

'It' is incorrectly used to refer to 'notes' which is plural, so 'them' is correct. Also, 'small notes' is awkward; 'notes' suffices. 'Door wall' is unclear; assuming 'door wall' means a wall near the door, 'on my door wall' is better. 'Tell it to me' is better expressed as 'remind me' in this context.