记忆— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Are you good at memorising things?
考生
Yes, I have a good memory. I remember. I can finish, finish remember a poem, a Chinese poem just by reading it several times when my classmates are struggle, are still struggle to remember.
考官
Have you ever forgotten something important?
考生
No, I always remember important things vividly in my mind and in order to prevent them from fading, I always recall them, like taking photos, drawing pictures, writing Diaries. So I didn't know that I forgot something important.
考官
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
考生
I need to remember my assignments. I'm a pharmaceutical student and there are lots of experiments and assignments in my daily study, so I need to make a list every day to record what I have learned and what I need to do tomorrow.
考官
How do you remember important things?
考生
I memorize important things by making reminders in my and track it everyday. For example, for my friend's birthday I will make the reminder in the calendars and when their birthday are come are coming I would I would be noticed, I would be noted, then I wouldn't.
评估
总分
Part 1
Are you good at memorising things?
分数: 65.0建议: 回答时语言不够流畅，有重复和语法错误，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更自然的表达方式。
示例: Yes, I have a good memory. For example, I can memorize a Chinese poem after reading it several times, while my classmates still struggle to remember it.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
分数: 70.0建议: 回答内容较丰富，但句子较长且有语法错误，建议分句表达并注意时态和单复数形式。
示例: No, I usually remember important things clearly. To keep them fresh in my mind, I often take photos, draw pictures, or write diaries.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
分数: 80.0建议: 回答结构清晰，内容具体，但可以使用更多连接词使表达更连贯。
示例: I need to remember my assignments because I am a pharmaceutical student. Since I have many experiments and tasks, I make a list every day to record what I have learned and what I need to do the next day.
How do you remember important things?
分数: 60.0建议: 回答中有多处语法和表达错误，建议简化句子，注意时态和单复数，使用连贯的表达。
示例: I remember important things by setting reminders on my phone and checking them every day. For example, I set calendar reminders for my friends' birthdays so I don't forget them.
语法
× when my classmates are struggle, are still struggle to remember.
✓ when my classmates are struggling, are still struggling to remember.
这里的动词需要用现在分词形式来表示正在进行的动作，应该用'struggling'而不是'struggle'。
× So I didn't know that I forgot something important.
✓ So I don't know that I have forgotten something important.
这里描述的是现在的状态，应该用现在时态或现在完成时态，'didn't know'和'forgot'是过去时，不符合语境。
× when their birthday are come are coming I would I would be noticed, I would be noted, then I wouldn't.
✓ when their birthdays are coming, I would be notified, then I wouldn't.
'birthday'应为复数'birthdays'，因为指多个朋友的生日；'are come'错误，应为'are coming'；'be noticed'用法不当，应为'be notified'表示被提醒。
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