记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Apni uttor e beshi spostho bhabe bolte paren je apni keno mone rakhte paren na ebong ki bhabe chesta koren mone rakhte. Uttor ta aro prokritik o sohoje bujha jete hobe. Apni beshi proyojonio tattho dite paren.

示例: I am not very good at memorising things because I often forget what I studied when exams come. However, I try to focus on understanding the material rather than just memorising it.

建议: Apnar uttor e aro bistarito udaharan dite paren, jemon kon dhoroner important jinis apni bhule jan, ebong keno. Ete uttor ta aro prokritik o bistarito hobe.

示例: Yes, I have forgotten important things during exams, especially key formulas or definitions that I studied but could not recall under pressure.

建议: Apni uttor e bistarito o spostho bhabe bolte paren je kon kon jinis apnar dainandin jibone mone rakhte hoy, ebong keno. Apni linking words babohar kore uttor ke sohoje bujha jete paren.

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember biology formulas, physics laws, mathematics formulas, and grammar rules because they are essential for my studies and communication.

建议: Apni uttor e aro spostho o sohoje bujha jete paren je apni ki poddhoti babohar koren mone rakhte. Linking words babohar kore uttor ke logical korte paren.

示例: I remember important things by organizing them into subjects. For example, I focus on one topic at a time, which helps me recall the information more easily.

× Not usually 'cause when my exams arrived I forgot everything, but I learned or what I read.

✓ Not usually 'cause when my exams arrive I forget everything, but I learn what I read.

The sentence incorrectly uses the past tense 'arrived' and 'forgot' when referring to a habitual action. Since the question is about general ability, present tense should be used to indicate repeated or habitual events. Also, 'learned' should be 'learn' to match the present tense context.

× Every time I learn an important topic in my study, I forget about it in my exams.

✓ Every time I learn an important topic in my study, I forget it during my exams.

The phrase 'forget about it' is less concise; 'forget it' is more appropriate. Also, 'in my exams' should be 'during my exams' to correctly express the time frame. The tense is correct here, so only preposition and phrasing are improved.

× I need to remember in my daily life is a biologist formulas, physics laws, mathematics formulas and grammatical formulas.

✓ What I need to remember in my daily life are biological formulas, physics laws, mathematical formulas, and grammatical formulas.

The subject is plural (formulas and laws), so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. Also, 'biologist formulas' is incorrect; it should be 'biological formulas'. Similarly, 'mathematics formulas' should be 'mathematical formulas' to correctly use adjectives.

× Some very strange words and some grammatical laws I don't understand but I have to remember it in my daily life.

✓ Some very strange words and some grammatical laws I don't understand, but I have to remember them in my daily life.

The pronoun 'it' is singular but refers to plural nouns 'words and laws'. The correct pronoun is 'them' to agree in number with the plural antecedents.

× By making it a subject like this is the subject.

✓ By making it a subject, like this is the subject.

The sentence is unclear and lacks proper punctuation. Adding a comma improves clarity. However, the sentence is still awkward; it would be better to rephrase for clarity, but per instructions, only grammar corrections are applied.

× What are you going to remember when?

✓ What are you going to remember and when?

The original sentence is incomplete and confusing. Adding 'and' connects the two questions properly, improving sentence structure.

× When I try to remember, I try to remember the subject.

✓ When I try to remember, I focus on the subject.

Repeating 'try to remember' is redundant. Replacing the second phrase with 'focus on the subject' improves clarity and sentence structure.