记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is understandable but a bit unclear and repetitive. Try to make your sentences more natural and concise. Avoid repeating phrases like 'on the long run' twice. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

示例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. Instead, I prefer to understand the material deeply because this helps me remember it better in the long run.

建议: Your answer tells a clear story but it is incomplete and has some grammar mistakes. Try to finish your sentences and use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to explain reasons. Also, avoid repeating similar ideas.

示例: Yes, I once forgot important information during exams in high school because I memorised without understanding. As a result, I couldn't recall anything during the test.

建议: Your answer is incomplete and a bit repetitive. Try to complete your sentences and avoid repeating words like 'always'. Use linking words to list your daily tasks clearly.

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember to pick up my children from school on time and take my wife to the market to buy groceries.

建议: Your answer is unclear and repetitive. Try to organise your ideas clearly and avoid repeating phrases like 'I have to'. Use linking words to explain your methods logically.

示例: Remembering important things is essential to me. Therefore, I write important dates and information in my phone and set reminders to help me remember them.

× I prefer to effectively bring the material or a content or understand it because it's definitely going to help me on the long run.

✓ I prefer to effectively understand the material or content because it's definitely going to help me in the long run.

The phrase 'bring the material or a content' is incorrect; the verb 'bring' does not fit here. The correct verb is 'understand' to express comprehension. Also, 'on the long run' should be 'in the long run' as the correct preposition is 'in' for this phrase.

× because it's definitely going to help me on the long run.

✓ because it's definitely going to help me in the long run.

The correct preposition in the phrase is 'in' not 'on'. We say 'in the long run' to mean over a long period of time.

× On the long run, instead of memorizing and I I tend to forget what I memorized.

✓ In the long run, instead of memorizing, I tend to forget what I memorized.

The phrase 'and I I tend to forget' is incorrect and redundant. It should be 'I tend to forget'. Also, 'On the long run' should be 'In the long run' as explained before.

× There was these exams I was preparing for when I was in high school.

✓ There were these exams I was preparing for when I was in high school.

The subject 'exams' is plural, so the verb should be 'were' not 'was' to agree in number.

× I went into the sample, I sat blank.

✓ I went into the exam, I sat blank.

The word 'sample' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'exam' which fits the context of preparing for tests.

× I went into the sample, I sat blank.

✓ I went into the exam and sat blank.

The sentence is a run-on and needs to be connected properly with 'and' to join the two actions.

× I always have to ensure I go to school on to to my children's school on time to pick them up

✓ I always have to ensure I go to my children's school on time to pick them up

The phrase 'go to school on to to my children's school' is incorrect and redundant. The correct phrase is 'go to my children's school' without extra prepositions.

× These are things I.

✓ These are things I have to do.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb to complete the thought.

× Remembering in important thing is very essential to me.

✓ Remembering important things is very essential to me.

The phrase 'in important thing' is incorrect. It should be 'important things' as plural and without 'in'.

× That is why I have a note that I jot things that are important than I mean dates in my phone.

✓ That is why I have a note where I jot down important things, like dates, in my phone.

The sentence is awkward and unclear. 'Than I mean dates' is incorrect. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning and corrects the structure.

× I also have to note I have to have to write down in important dates and information and set them as a reminder which here.

✓ I also have to write down important dates and information and set them as reminders on my phone.

The sentence is repetitive and unclear. 'I have to note I have to have to' is redundant. The correction simplifies and clarifies the meaning.