记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and unclear expressions. Try to use clear and correct sentences, avoid filler words like 'uh', and make your points more coherent. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

示例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things, especially when the information is important or interesting to me. However, if something is not relevant, I tend to forget it easily. Therefore, I focus on remembering valuable information to avoid unnecessary effort.

建议: Your answer is relevant but a bit repetitive and has some grammar errors. Try to use varied vocabulary and sentence structures, and avoid repeating the same idea. Use linking words to make your answer more fluent.

示例: I have rarely forgotten anything important because I always plan ahead and keep a To-Do List. Whenever something is special or urgent, I make sure to write it down. This system helps me remember tasks effectively.

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and repetitive. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid repeating the same words. Use linking words to connect your points and provide specific details.

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember to meditate regularly. I also make sure to set aside time for self-care and relaxation, such as doing breathing exercises for about ten minutes each day.

建议: Your answer is relevant but contains grammar mistakes and some redundancy. Try to use clear and correct sentences, avoid repeating the same idea, and use linking words to improve coherence.

示例: I remember important things by making a To-Do List. Throughout the day, I check the list and mark tasks as completed. This method helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget anything important.

× then I may forgot.

✓ then I may forget.

The modal verb 'may' should be followed by the base form of the verb, not the past tense. 'Forgot' is past tense, but after 'may' the correct form is 'forget'.

× the information has to have value to Remember Me and an important thing does not involve my brain.

✓ the information has to have value to me and an important thing does not involve my brain.

'Remember Me' is incorrect here; the pronoun 'me' should be used without 'Remember'. The phrase should be 'value to me'.

× Remembering thing is important, but unnecessary steps is not good.

✓ Remembering things is important, but unnecessary steps are not good.

'Thing' should be plural 'things' to match the general statement. Also, 'steps' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'.

× I never have forgotten something important because I always try to plan things and I have To Do List and if something is important to me and really special, I always write down it in my To Do List.

✓ I have never forgotten something important because I always try to plan things and I have a To Do List and if something is important to me and really special, I always write it down in my To Do List.

The correct word order is 'have never forgotten'. Also, 'To Do List' needs an article 'a'. The phrase 'write down it' is incorrect; it should be 'write it down'.

× I always write down it in my To Do List.

✓ I always write it down in my To Do List.

The pronoun 'it' should come before the phrasal verb 'write down'. The correct order is 'write it down'.

× If and if I do, then my To Do List remembers me.

✓ If I do, then my To Do List reminds me.

The phrase 'If and if' is redundant; only one 'if' is needed. Also, 'remembers me' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'reminds me'.

× I meditate, so I have to remember meditation. Mostly it remembers me by itself, but I try to remember it mostly.

✓ I meditate, so I have to remember meditation. Mostly it reminds me by itself, but I try to remember it mostly.

The verb 'remembers me' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'reminds me'.

× I need to remember relaxing breathings every day for 10 minutes.

✓ I need to remember to do relaxing breathing exercises every day for 10 minutes.

'Breathings' is not a correct plural noun; the correct term is 'breathing exercises'. Also, 'relaxing' modifies 'breathing exercises'.

× I already told you that I remember thanks by making to the list when I write something in my todo list and I check during the day my todo list and then I will write which task was done already.

✓ I already told you that I remember things by making a list. When I write something in my To Do List, I check it during the day and then I write which tasks have already been done.

'Remember thanks' is incorrect; it should be 'remember things'. 'Making to the list' is incorrect; it should be 'making a list'. Also, the sentence structure is improved for clarity and correct tense usage.

× Having a total list is the key that helps me all the time.

✓ Having a complete list is the key that helps me all the time.

'Total list' is not a natural phrase; 'complete list' is more appropriate. The definite article 'the' is correctly used here.