记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is a bit repetitive and unclear. Try to give a direct response first, then add specific reasons or examples. Also, use correct prepositions like 'good at' instead of 'good in'.

示例: Yes, I am good at memorising things because I have a sharp mind since childhood. For example, I can easily remember important dates and facts without much effort.

建议: Your answer needs to be clearer and more grammatically correct. Try to structure your answer with a topic sentence and supporting details, and avoid unnecessary words like 'and but'.

示例: Yes, last month I forgot my expensive watch at my relative's house. It was very important to me because it was a gift from my parents.

建议: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by using better linking words and more precise vocabulary. Also, avoid repeating 'on my daily life' and use 'in my daily life' instead.

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember my diet because it is crucial for maintaining my health and providing me with enough energy throughout the day.

建议: Your answer is repetitive and a bit unclear. Try to give a clear topic sentence and then explain with specific details. Also, avoid repeating phrases like 'remember from my mind'.

示例: I usually rely on my memory to remember important things because I have had a sharp mind since childhood. I prefer not to use devices like phones or notes for this purpose.

× Yes, I am good in memorizing things because I have a sharp mind from my childhood and I like to learn about all memorizing activity of my childhood and also I like to learn about my memorizing things.

✓ Yes, I am good at memorizing things because I have had a sharp mind since my childhood and I like to learn about all memorizing activities from my childhood and also I like to learn about my memorizing things.

The phrase 'good in' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'good at' when referring to skills. Also, 'from my childhood' is better expressed as 'since my childhood' to indicate a continuous state. 'Activity' should be plural 'activities' to match 'all'. These changes improve grammatical accuracy and clarity.

× Yes, it was the matter of last month when I forgot my expensive watch on my relative home and but it is very important.

✓ Yes, it was a matter from last month when I forgot my expensive watch at my relative's home, and it was very important.

The phrase 'the matter of last month' is better as 'a matter from last month'. The preposition 'on' should be 'at' when referring to a location like 'home'. 'Relative home' needs possessive form 'relative's home'. The conjunction 'and but' is incorrect; only 'and' is needed. Also, 'it is very important' should be 'it was very important' to maintain past tense consistency.

× I like to remember my diet on my daily life because it is very crucial for me and provide energy to me.

✓ I like to remember my diet in my daily life because it is very crucial for me and provides energy to me.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect here; 'in my daily life' is the correct phrase. Also, the verb 'provide' should be 'provides' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× I remember important things by my mind because I have a sharp mind for my childhood and I like to remember all things from my mind, not like to use another device to remember important things.

✓ I remember important things with my mind because I have had a sharp mind since my childhood and I like to remember all things from my mind; I do not like to use another device to remember important things.

The preposition 'by' is incorrect; 'with my mind' is appropriate. 'For my childhood' should be 'since my childhood' to indicate duration. The phrase 'not like to use' is ungrammatical; it should be 'I do not like to use'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical correctness.