记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tự nhiên hơn và tránh lặp từ. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc. Ví dụ, bạn có thể nói rõ ràng về việc quên thẻ ID và hậu quả của nó.

示例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. For instance, recently when I came here to take the test, I almost forgot my identification card, which could have caused serious problems.

建议: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và nói rõ ràng hơn về sự việc. Sử dụng liên từ để kết nối các ý và làm câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

示例: Yes, I have. For example, once I forgot to save my presentation on my computer the day before, and as a result, I received an F grade.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn chưa hoàn chỉnh và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên hoàn thành câu và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời rõ ràng và đầy đủ hơn.

示例: As a college student, I need to remember to bring my student ID card and notebooks related to my classes. Also, I always check my schedule to know what tasks I have to complete.

建议: Bạn nên sử dụng thì đúng ngữ pháp và nói rõ hơn về phương pháp ghi chú. Thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

示例: Based on my past mistakes, I have concluded that taking notes is an effective way to remember important things. It helps me keep track of what I need to do.

× For example like recently I before I went, I went here taking the test, I almost forget my identification identification card, which may result in much worse outcome.

✓ For example, recently before I went here to take the test, I almost forgot my identification card, which could have resulted in a much worse outcome.

The verb 'forget' should be in the past tense 'forgot' to match the past time frame indicated by 'recently' and 'before I went'. Also, 'taking the test' should be corrected to 'to take the test' for proper infinitive usage. The phrase 'may result' is better as 'could have resulted' to reflect a past hypothetical situation.

× If I remember correctly it was a 5 for one of my presentations which the the day before I forgot to save it in my computer and you can guess what happened next.

✓ If I remember correctly, it was a 5 for one of my presentations because the day before, I forgot to save it on my computer and you can guess what happened next.

The sentence needs a conjunction 'because' to connect the cause and effect properly. Also, 'in my computer' should be 'on my computer' as the correct preposition for saving files. The past tense 'forgot' is correct here.

× I got an F grade for my presentation because of that.

✓ I got an F grade for my presentation because of that.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no changes needed.

× So I am currently a college student and during school I must bring with me my student ID card and some other notebook that related to the subject I'm going to take.

✓ So I am currently a college student and during school I must bring with me my student ID card and some other notebooks that are related to the subjects I'm going to take.

'Notebook' should be plural 'notebooks' to match 'some other'. Also, 'that related' needs the verb 'are' to form the relative clause 'that are related'. 'Subject' should be plural 'subjects' to agree with 'some other notebooks'.

× Additionally, I had to check the schedule what task I am going to take and.

✓ Additionally, I have to check the schedule to see what tasks I am going to do.

The original sentence is incomplete and awkward. 'Had to' suggests past tense but the context is present/future, so 'have to' is better. 'What task I am going to take' is incorrect; it should be 'what tasks I am going to do' or 'what tasks I have'. The sentence should be completed properly.

× From my previous mistakes in the past, I have came up to the conclusion that I need to start taking notes.

✓ From my previous mistakes in the past, I have come to the conclusion that I need to start taking notes.

The present perfect form of 'come' is 'have come', not 'have came'. 'Have came' is incorrect past tense usage.

× It is a very good method to record the text that I plan on.

✓ It is a very good method to record the notes that I plan to use.

The phrase 'record the text that I plan on' is incomplete and unclear. 'Plan on' needs an object or verb. Changing to 'record the notes that I plan to use' clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.