记忆— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Are you good at memorising things?
考生
Yeah, no, I'm not quite good at memorizing things because I often forget a lot of things, but only on the little things, I think, and because I got a lot of things to handle with. So I'm not really good at, you know, I really had to take it down instead of memorizing it.
考官
Have you ever forgotten something important?
考生
Well, yes, I do have that's because I when I'm about to graduate from my college and I really need to take the examination for the say that the graduate examination and I forgot to sign in.
考官
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
考生
Well, that's a lot of things that I really need to remember in my daily life. First of all, first of all, I really need to take medicine for my cat and because it got really serious illness. And the second one and I really, you know, like check my work if it's have if it's done or not, and I really need to.
考官
How do you remember important things?
考生
I will take a note on my cellphone and also I will write it down with my pen and it's the most easy way for me to like memorizing things and because I'm really a forgotten people. So yes writing down my phone is easiest way too.
评估
总分
Part 1
Are you good at memorising things?
分数: 60.0建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然，句子结构混乱，建议简化句子，直接回答问题，并用连贯的句子表达原因。
示例: I'm not very good at memorising things because I often forget small details. I prefer to write things down to help me remember better.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
分数: 55.0建议: 回答不够清晰，语法错误较多，表达混乱。建议简洁明了地叙述事件，使用正确的时态和句子结构。
示例: Yes, once I forgot to sign in for my graduation exam, which was very important.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
分数: 50.0建议: 回答不完整且重复，句子不连贯。建议列举具体事项，使用连词使表达更流畅。
示例: In my daily life, I need to remember to give medicine to my sick cat and to check if my work tasks are completed.
How do you remember important things?
分数: 65.0建议: 表达较为自然，但有语法错误和重复。建议简化句子，避免重复，使用更准确的表达。
示例: I usually write important things down on my phone or on paper because I tend to forget easily.
语法
× I often forget a lot of things, but only on the little things
✓ I often forget a lot of things, but only the little things
这里的介词用法不正确，应该用定冠词the来限定特指的小事情，而不是用介词on。
× I really had to take it down instead of memorizing it.
✓ I really have to write it down instead of memorizing it.
时态不一致，句子描述的是现在的习惯，应使用现在时态have to，且表达“记下来”用write it down更合适。
× Well, yes, I do have that's because I when I'm about to graduate from my college and I really need to take the examination for the say that the graduate examination and I forgot to sign in.
✓ Well, yes, I have. That's because when I was about to graduate from my college, I really needed to take the graduate examination, but I forgot to sign in.
句子结构混乱，缺少必要的连接词和时态不一致，需拆分成多个句子并调整时态。
× I really need to take medicine for my cat and because it got really serious illness.
✓ I really need to give medicine to my cat because it has a really serious illness.
动词搭配错误，take medicine通常指自己吃药，给宠物吃药应用give medicine to，且时态应为现在时。
× And the second one and I really, you know, like check my work if it's have if it's done or not, and I really need to.
✓ And secondly, I really need to check my work to see if it is done or not.
句子中“it's have”错误，主谓不一致，应为“it is”，且表达更简洁。
× I will take a note on my cellphone and also I will write it down with my pen and it's the most easy way for me to like memorizing things
✓ I will take notes on my cellphone and also write them down with my pen. It's the easiest way for me to memorize things.
动词形式错误，memorizing应改为动词原形memorize，且表达更自然。
× So yes writing down my phone is easiest way too.
✓ So yes, writing things down on my phone is the easiest way too.
缺少复数形式和介词，notes或things down更合适，且应加介词on my phone。
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