记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答自然且内容丰富，但可以更直接地回答问题的核心，比如先明确说自己记忆力一般，然后再说明方法。连接词使用得当，但句子稍长，建议简化表达。

示例: I'm not very good at memorising things. However, I find it easier when I connect what I need to remember with my personal experiences. For example, relating facts to my own stories helps me remember them longer.

建议: 回答内容具体且有趣，但句子结构稍显复杂，部分表达不够地道。建议使用更简洁的句子，并注意时态和表达的准确性。

示例: Yes, I once forgot about brewing my traditional Chinese medicine because I was distracted by videos on my phone. I only noticed the burning smell later, which was almost a disaster. This experience taught me to be more careful.

建议: 回答内容丰富且具体，但部分表达不够自然，如“stay myself organized”应改为“stay organized”。建议注意固定搭配和表达的自然流畅。

示例: I need to remember many things daily, such as my assignments, grocery list, deadlines, and passwords. Since passwords and deadlines are easy to forget, I keep track of them to stay organized and avoid problems.

建议: 回答结构清晰，内容具体，表达自然。可以稍微丰富连接词的使用，使句子更连贯。

示例: I rely heavily on digital tools, so my mobile phone is indispensable. I often set alarms or reminders to help me remember important things. Besides that, I use traditional methods like sticking sticky notes in visible places, which helps me keep track effectively.

× Of course, not long ago when I was brewing my traditional Chinese medicine, I was distracted by some short videos on my phone, so I sat on the sofa to enjoy myself.

✓ Of course, not long ago when I was brewing my traditional Chinese medicine, I was distracted by some short videos on my phone, so I sat on the sofa to enjoy myself.

该句中动词时态使用正确，符合过去发生的动作描述，无需修改。

× When I finally realized the burning smell, it was nearly to be a certain disaster.

✓ When I finally realized the burning smell, it was nearly a certain disaster.

“nearly to be”结构不正确，应该用“nearly a certain disaster”来表达“几乎是一个灾难”。“to be”在这里多余且不符合英语习惯。

× So it is a wake up call for me to be more careful.

✓ So it is a wake-up call for me to be more careful.

“wake up call”作为名词短语应连写为“wake-up call”，表示“警钟”。这里不是动词短语，因此需要连字符连接。

× In my daily life, I have to remember quite a variety of things, from my assignment grocery list to my school work deadlines and passwords.

✓ In my daily life, I have to remember quite a variety of things, from my assignment and grocery list to my school work deadlines and passwords.

“assignment grocery list”缺少连接词，应该用“and”连接两个名词，表示“作业和购物清单”。

× You know, passwords and deadlines are quite easy to be forgotten, so I have to keep track of all these mundane things to stay myself organized and avoid some unnecessary hassles.

✓ You know, passwords and deadlines are quite easy to be forgotten, so I have to keep track of all these mundane things to stay organized and avoid some unnecessary hassles.

“stay myself organized”中“myself”使用错误，正确表达是“stay organized”，因为“stay”后直接跟形容词，不需要反身代词。

× Besides that, I use traditional methods such as sticking sticky notes wherever I see.

✓ Besides that, I use traditional methods such as sticking sticky notes wherever I go.

“wherever I see”不符合习惯表达，应该用“wherever I go”表示“无论我去哪里”，更符合语境。